Moonlight Delight, Bananas and Apples

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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Man_in_the_Moon

https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/6/61/Moon_names.svg

Aurora - A Shade of Yellow from (Shades of Yellow Color Names Facts). Sorry, you will have to google it youself. 

Also

https://www.thesun.co.uk/living/2633741/harvest-moon-september-2017-full-names/

"September – Harvest Moon

The Harvest Moon most commonly occurs in September, but the name goes to the full moon closest to the autumn equinox, which can fall during October once or twice every decade.

The name was given to the September moon by Native Americans because it marked when {corn} was supposed to be harvested.

This year the full Harvest Moon takes place on September 6 at 8.02am"

Kinda cool since the poem was written on September 6.

“P recise Aurora
 A sea of fertility
 S haring the lunar cow flown
 S ince God only knows
 U nknown the core could be cheese"
 S urmised the Man in the moon


"P resently Luna
 A sea of storms, clouds, showers
 S haring that has become known
 S upreme only knows
 U nbeknown how much gold there be"
 S poke the Lady in the moon


9/6/2017  Updated 5/14/2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 10/23/2017 2:02:00 PM
Enjoyed! Lovely and fun!
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Date: 9/24/2017 12:07:00 AM
Two versions! Both fun to read. I like the "unknown the core could be cheese" and "unbeknown how much gold there be" :)
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G. Jay
Date: 9/24/2017 11:59:00 PM
thank you. I tried to relate food to men and gold to women.
Date: 9/7/2017 8:34:00 AM
Two exquisite takes....Too Beautiful! :-))
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G. Jay
Date: 9/9/2017 3:18:00 PM
Glad you like. Though, i should have arranged them parallel with the title Apple and Orange.
Date: 9/7/2017 3:14:00 AM
- Beautifully written, G. - // Anne-Lise :)
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G. Jay
Date: 9/9/2017 3:22:00 PM
your name makes me want to use 100 smiling emojis
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