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Moonlight Delight

Gibbous moon pale bright Peeks horizon in twilight As it orbits around earth And sprinkles its dust To bless us in reunion Under glorious full moon. September 7, 2017 Placed 5th: Moonlight Delight contest 5,7,7 5,7,7

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Date: 2/17/2024 9:14:00 AM
Very nicely penned Vijay
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Date: 9/13/2017 10:48:00 PM
Excellent write, Vijay - just love the imagery and metaphor! Congrats on your well-deserved win, my friend! :-)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/14/2017 6:28:00 AM
Thanks Greg!
Date: 9/11/2017 8:03:00 PM
Congrats Vijay, thats a form ide not heard of.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/11/2017 8:21:00 PM
Thank you terry!
Date: 9/10/2017 8:28:00 PM
way to go, Vijay. Congrats.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/10/2017 9:31:00 PM
Thank you Andrea!
Date: 9/10/2017 1:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win ... Beautifully expressed ... Thanks for appreciating my placement in the contest ...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/10/2017 6:40:00 AM
Thank you Probir!
Date: 9/9/2017 11:40:00 PM
Congratulation, Vijay on your win with this beautiful poem.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/10/2017 6:39:00 AM
Thank you Subimal!
Date: 9/9/2017 4:06:00 PM
Vijay, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/9/2017 6:06:00 PM
Thanks Eve!
Date: 9/9/2017 2:17:00 PM
- Congratulations on your beautiful 5th place, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/9/2017 3:11:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise!
Date: 9/9/2017 8:24:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Vijay! Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/9/2017 8:34:00 AM
Thanks Janice!
Date: 9/9/2017 8:23:00 AM
Congrats!!! Vijay my friend...yahoo!!!...^WW^
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/9/2017 8:33:00 AM
Thanks WW!
Date: 9/9/2017 8:06:00 AM
Congrats Vijay to win. Best wishes.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/9/2017 8:33:00 AM
Thanks Anisha!
Date: 9/8/2017 8:56:00 PM
Nothing better than a gibbous moon!! Sometimes the moon can look so big! It's just a wonder! Well done, Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/8/2017 9:06:00 PM
Thank you Andrea!
Date: 9/8/2017 8:17:00 AM
Lovely poem, Vijay! Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/8/2017 8:56:00 AM
Thank you Janice!
Date: 9/7/2017 9:05:00 PM
I watched the blazing moon rise yesterday with my granddaughter. We both marveled at how large it seemed and I took several pictures of it. The moon is indeed mesmerizing as your poem reflects! : )
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/8/2017 7:22:00 AM
Thank you Connie for your lovely comments!
Date: 9/7/2017 1:53:00 PM
Best wishes in the contest Vijay...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/7/2017 2:39:00 PM
Thank you Charlie!
Date: 9/7/2017 9:50:00 AM
A lovely read Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/7/2017 1:51:00 PM
Thanks Tim!
Date: 9/7/2017 7:02:00 AM
Marvelous my friend, Vijay! Reading it came to mind yesterday's full moon as I watched it rising over Marathon Bay in Greece! Good luck!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/7/2017 7:39:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios for your lovely comments!
Date: 9/7/2017 6:29:00 AM
A happy poem! GL in contest!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/7/2017 7:38:00 AM
Thanks Kim!

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