Vijay Pandit Poet Sedoka

Moonlight Delight

Gibbous moon pale bright
Peeks horizon in twilight
As it orbits around earth
And sprinkles its dust
To bless us in reunion
Under glorious full moon.

September 7, 2017
Placed 5th: Moonlight Delight contest
5,7,7 5,7,7

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Joseph May February 17, 2024 at 9:14 AM Very nicely penned Vijay

Gregory Richard Barden September 13, 2017 at 10:48 PM Excellent write, Vijay - just love the imagery and metaphor! Congrats on your well-deserved win, my friend! :-) Vijay Pandit September 14, 2017 at 6:28 AM Thanks Greg!

Terry Shuff September 11, 2017 at 8:03 PM Congrats Vijay, thats a form ide not heard of. Vijay Pandit September 11, 2017 at 8:21 PM Thank you terry!

Andrea Dietrich September 10, 2017 at 8:28 PM way to go, Vijay. Congrats. Vijay Pandit September 10, 2017 at 9:31 PM Thank you Andrea!

Probir Gupta September 10, 2017 at 1:21 AM Congratulations on your win ... Beautifully expressed ... Thanks for appreciating my placement in the contest ... Vijay Pandit September 10, 2017 at 6:40 AM Thank you Probir!

Subimal Sinha-Roy September 9, 2017 at 11:40 PM Congratulation, Vijay on your win with this beautiful poem. Vijay Pandit September 10, 2017 at 6:39 AM Thank you Subimal!

Eve Roper September 9, 2017 at 4:06 PM Vijay, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`* Vijay Pandit September 9, 2017 at 6:06 PM Thanks Eve!

Anne-Lise Andresen September 9, 2017 at 2:17 PM - Congratulations on your beautiful 5th place, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit September 9, 2017 at 3:11 PM Thank you Anne-Lise!

Janice Canerdy September 9, 2017 at 8:24 AM Congrats on your win, Vijay! Janice Vijay Pandit September 9, 2017 at 8:34 AM Thanks Janice!

Winged Warrior September 9, 2017 at 8:23 AM Congrats!!! Vijay my friend...yahoo!!!...^WW^ Vijay Pandit September 9, 2017 at 8:33 AM Thanks WW!

Anisha Dutta September 9, 2017 at 8:06 AM Congrats Vijay to win. Best wishes. Vijay Pandit September 9, 2017 at 8:33 AM Thanks Anisha!

Andrea Dietrich September 8, 2017 at 8:56 PM Nothing better than a gibbous moon!! Sometimes the moon can look so big! It's just a wonder! Well done, Vijay. Vijay Pandit September 8, 2017 at 9:06 PM Thank you Andrea!

Janice Canerdy September 8, 2017 at 8:17 AM Lovely poem, Vijay! Janice Vijay Pandit September 8, 2017 at 8:56 AM Thank you Janice!

Connie Marcum Wong September 7, 2017 at 9:05 PM I watched the blazing moon rise yesterday with my granddaughter. We both marveled at how large it seemed and I took several pictures of it. The moon is indeed mesmerizing as your poem reflects! : ) Vijay Pandit September 8, 2017 at 7:22 AM Thank you Connie for your lovely comments!

Charlie Smith September 7, 2017 at 1:53 PM Best wishes in the contest Vijay... Vijay Pandit September 7, 2017 at 2:39 PM Thank you Charlie!

Tim Smith September 7, 2017 at 9:50 AM A lovely read Vijay Vijay Pandit September 7, 2017 at 1:51 PM Thanks Tim!

Demetrios Trifiatis September 7, 2017 at 7:02 AM Marvelous my friend, Vijay! Reading it came to mind yesterday's full moon as I watched it rising over Marathon Bay in Greece! Good luck! Vijay Pandit September 7, 2017 at 7:39 AM Thank you Demetrios for your lovely comments!

Kim Rodrigues September 7, 2017 at 6:29 AM A happy poem! GL in contest! Vijay Pandit September 7, 2017 at 7:38 AM Thanks Kim!