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Moonlight Delight

Steamy moonlit night the vacant hot tub beckoned honeymoon couple kiss bliss amore was short lived loud claps of thunder then rain safe inside ate some moon pies 9-6-17

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 9/13/2017 11:04:00 PM

Very charming and whimsical, Cheryl - love it! Blessings and congrats on your win, my friend! :-) <3

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 9/14/2017 7:37:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Greg; win is always a nice surprise my friend! Blessings to you too~Che :)

Pat Adams

Date: 9/11/2017 4:17:00 PM

I love it! Ate some moon pies, is so funny, but why not? Moon pies are good, right?......Pat

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 9/11/2017 8:55:00 PM

I'm not over the moon about moon pies but people at my job are! Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Pat!~Che :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/9/2017 2:28:00 PM

- Congratulations on your beautiful 10th place, Cheryl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 9/9/2017 7:27:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Ann-Lise; win is always nice surprise for me!~hugs~Che :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/9/2017 8:54:00 AM

Congrats!!! Cheryl...great entry my friend...Yahoo!!!...^WW^

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 9/9/2017 9:27:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit W/W! Always a nice surprise for me!~Che :)