Moonlight Delight

Steamy moonlit night
the vacant hot tub beckoned
honeymoon couple kiss bliss
amore was short lived
loud claps of thunder then rain
safe inside ate some moon pies



9-6-17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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September 13, 2017 at 11:04 PM
Very charming and whimsical, Cheryl - love it! Blessings and congrats on your win, my friend! :-) <3
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September 14, 2017 at 7:37 AM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Greg; win is always a nice surprise my friend! Blessings to you too~Che :)
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September 11, 2017 at 4:17 PM
I love it! Ate some moon pies, is so funny, but why not? Moon pies are good, right?......Pat
Hoffman Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 8:55 PM
I'm not over the moon about moon pies but people at my job are! Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Pat!~Che :)
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September 9, 2017 at 2:28 PM
- Congratulations on your beautiful 10th place, Cheryl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Hoffman Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 7:27 PM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Ann-Lise; win is always nice surprise for me!~hugs~Che :)
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September 9, 2017 at 8:54 AM
Congrats!!! Cheryl...great entry my friend...Yahoo!!!...^WW^
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September 9, 2017 at 9:27 AM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit W/W! Always a nice surprise for me!~Che :)
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