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Moonglow

Evening has quietly tiptoed away on slippered feet Houses up and down the street are silhouttes A garden looks white, washed in moonlight, And the faint sound of a train whistles through the air leaving a trail of melancholy longing, resounding in the dark. A table had been cleared of all traces of dinner and has now been set for breakfast Doors are locked, and a screen has been put across the glowing embers. Two golden laboradors in deep slumber, are curled in their baskets by the back door The house settles as the momentum of a busy day winds itself down. A mantel clock is ticking, and the refrigerator is humming with comfortable familiarity The moon slowly makes a shadowy passage through the windows of each room, as it puts the house to bed... And today becomes tomorrow... -------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/18/2009 10:08:00 AM
Our domestic ritual, when we consider it, is almost liturgical, and speaks to our existential anxiety as much as the cosmic consolation we feel with the presence of material things in their eternal sphere. This is a beautiful poem that invites me to the moment, a well written choreography of feelings.
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Date: 5/15/2009 8:42:00 AM
am left sweetly lulled to rest!!! poem works like magic elixer! nice! and thanks for comments Carrie, your sweet...Jim
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Date: 5/13/2009 5:57:00 PM
One Dimensional wall huggers, cornering the vertical connections of safe places. Hey congrats on the 4th place win in DG's contest!-AA
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Date: 5/13/2009 3:04:00 PM
This is a wonderful poem. I like the way you described the moon ...putting the house to bed. Sweet dreams, all. Very nice write. Love, Dane
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Date: 5/13/2009 2:48:00 PM
What a wonderful poem and I can so relate to those final sounds - i love your comment though I can't accept the praise because when i first joined "Tag" was a big part of the soup - I guess as old members faded and new members came it just got lost - A lot of closeness of our site got lost with it I think - When you get busy playing tag with those who matter those who don't fade away - I love you neighbor and actually got me one of those "Miracle Ears" in case you holler - YF4L, God Bless, MJ
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Date: 5/13/2009 1:35:00 PM
what a wonderful picture you paint, Carrie.. I love 'puts the house to bed'
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Date: 5/13/2009 6:52:00 AM
Incredible capture of imagery. Deeply peaceful and soothing, like a painting in my mind's eye with that ever enigmatic moon up above. Stunning work! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/13/2009 6:22:00 AM
What a peaceful scene you have painted Carrie! Lovely images... so restful and quiet! Well done honey! Blessings and hugs, Keith
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Date: 5/12/2009 11:43:00 PM
Beautiful writing as usual Carrie.Rgds Brian &thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 5/12/2009 7:22:00 PM
A welcome sense of peace, tranquility in this amazing poem. Love the description of the backyard, the owl (we have lots of them in my backyard), the sleeping labs and even the faint sounds heard within the house. Picturing this will help me sleep tonight. Thank you for sharing this wonderful write! Love, Carolyn
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