Moonglow

Evening has quietly tiptoed away on slippered feet
Houses up and down the street are silhouttes

A garden looks white, washed in moonlight, 
And the faint sound of a train whistles through the air 
            leaving a trail of melancholy longing, resounding in the dark.

A table had been cleared of all traces of dinner
   and has now been set for breakfast

Doors are locked, and a
      screen has been put across the glowing embers.
Two golden laboradors 
     in deep slumber, are curled in their baskets by the back door

The house settles 
       as the momentum of a busy day
                                         winds itself down.

A mantel clock is ticking, and the refrigerator is humming with comfortable familiarity

                  The moon slowly makes a shadowy passage
                        through the windows of each room, 
                                            as it puts the house to bed...
                                         
                                                            And today becomes tomorrow...



-------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Shango Avatar
May 18, 2009 at 10:08 AM
Our domestic ritual, when we consider it, is almost liturgical, and speaks to our existential anxiety as much as the cosmic consolation we feel with the presence of material things in their eternal sphere. This is a beautiful poem that invites me to the moment, a well written choreography of feelings.
Goff Avatar
May 15, 2009 at 8:42 AM
am left sweetly lulled to rest!!! poem works like magic elixer! nice! and thanks for comments Carrie, your sweet...Jim
Hudson Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 5:57 PM
One Dimensional wall huggers, cornering the vertical connections of safe places. Hey congrats on the 4th place win in DG's contest!-AA
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 3:04 PM
This is a wonderful poem. I like the way you described the moon ...putting the house to bed. Sweet dreams, all. Very nice write. Love, Dane
Jordan Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 2:48 PM
What a wonderful poem and I can so relate to those final sounds - i love your comment though I can't accept the praise because when i first joined "Tag" was a big part of the soup - I guess as old members faded and new members came it just got lost - A lot of closeness of our site got lost with it I think - When you get busy playing tag with those who matter those who don't fade away - I love you neighbor and actually got me one of those "Miracle Ears" in case you holler - YF4L, God Bless, MJ
Bellefleur Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 1:35 PM
what a wonderful picture you paint, Carrie.. I love 'puts the house to bed'
Winter Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 6:52 AM
Incredible capture of imagery. Deeply peaceful and soothing, like a painting in my mind's eye with that ever enigmatic moon up above. Stunning work! Love, Shar
Bickerstaffe Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 6:22 AM
What a peaceful scene you have painted Carrie! Lovely images... so restful and quiet! Well done honey! Blessings and hugs, Keith
Strand Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 11:43 PM
Beautiful writing as usual Carrie.Rgds Brian &thanks for your welcome comments
Devonshire Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 7:22 PM
A welcome sense of peace, tranquility in this amazing poem. Love the description of the backyard, the owl (we have lots of them in my backyard), the sleeping labs and even the faint sounds heard within the house. Picturing this will help me sleep tonight. Thank you for sharing this wonderful write! Love, Carolyn
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace