Moonflower Haiku

Alone, weeps in the night. Whippoorwill, goes to her side. Comfort, in moonlight. 3-3-2021 ~5~ Rhymed Haiku

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/6/2021 10:53:00 PM

Oh wow, what a great piece of imagery.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/10/2021 2:41:00 PM

ML. 3/10' I commented and it is gone. Sorry. Thank you Pangie

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 3/4/2021 7:07:00 AM

This is gorgeous. I so miss the whippoorwill, probably the most glorious sound I have ever heard. xomo

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/10/2021 2:40:00 PM

Repeated comment 3/10. Thank you Pangie

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/4/2021 12:46:00 PM

Oh, I am so glad you commented. I was waiting for someone to say how gorgeous it was. I saw it that way, too!! I see a warmth, a, closeness and friendship in it. It's more than imagery, I hope Hugs, Pangie. Xx

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 3/4/2021 6:04:00 AM

Lovely words, sweet friend. God bless you again and again... with hope faith and love, Gina

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/4/2021 12:41:00 PM

Ah, Regina!! Hope, Faih and love!! Always need more! Thank you. To God be the glory! Panagiota

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/4/2021 12:54:00 AM

The night is a chance to rest and boost our spirits and pray for a better tomorrow. Tom

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/4/2021 12:38:00 PM

Tom, isn't that the truth, though? -))) Thank you Pangie

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/3/2021 2:13:00 PM

To make the lines rhyme in a haiku poem is quite an accomplishment. You did quite well here.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/4/2021 12:37:00 PM

I really love RHYMED Haikus and Rhymed Senryus, Robert. And yes, they do exist. Two of my earlier ones had POTDs. I prefer them to the ones I learned here. There are so many Japanese forms. I saw a new one, I can't wait to try. Thank you...PANGIE.