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Moonflower Haiku

Alone, weeps in the night.
             Whippoorwill, goes to her side.
             Comfort, in moonlight.


                        3-3-2021
                            ~5~

                    Rhymed Haiku

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M. L. Kiser

March 6, 2021 at 10:53 PM

Oh wow, what a great piece of imagery.

Panagiota Romios

March 10, 2021 at 2:41 PM

ML. 3/10' I commented and it is gone. Sorry. Thank you Pangie

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 4, 2021 at 7:07 AM

This is gorgeous. I so miss the whippoorwill, probably the most glorious sound I have ever heard. xomo

Panagiota Romios

March 10, 2021 at 2:40 PM

Repeated comment 3/10. Thank you Pangie

Panagiota Romios

March 4, 2021 at 12:46 PM

Oh, I am so glad you commented. I was waiting for someone to say how gorgeous it was. I saw it that way, too!! I see a warmth, a, closeness and friendship in it. It's more than imagery, I hope Hugs, Pangie. Xx

Regina Mcintosh

March 4, 2021 at 6:04 AM

Lovely words, sweet friend. God bless you again and again... with hope faith and love, Gina

Panagiota Romios

March 4, 2021 at 12:41 PM

Ah, Regina!! Hope, Faih and love!! Always need more! Thank you. To God be the glory! Panagiota

Tom Cunningham

March 4, 2021 at 12:54 AM

The night is a chance to rest and boost our spirits and pray for a better tomorrow. Tom

Panagiota Romios

March 4, 2021 at 12:38 PM

Tom, isn't that the truth, though? -))) Thank you Pangie

Robert Pettit

March 3, 2021 at 2:13 PM

To make the lines rhyme in a haiku poem is quite an accomplishment. You did quite well here.

Panagiota Romios

March 4, 2021 at 12:37 PM

I really love RHYMED Haikus and Rhymed Senryus, Robert. And yes, they do exist. Two of my earlier ones had POTDs. I prefer them to the ones I learned here. There are so many Japanese forms. I saw a new one, I can't wait to try. Thank you...PANGIE.

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