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Moonchild Ballad By Lyn

Her moonchild ballad so heartfelt and warm the voice of an angel, lifting my heart I am captivated and intrigued my imagination parades through meadows and mountains she is singing in a language I do not know yet my soul understands completely There is a tenderness that is precious A bit of a lament, a love poem She is singing to her lover, assuring him that she will always know him Through past lives, and future incarnations. Her notes caress my ears, assuring me of her love An incredible gift, you have Lyn, An angelic voice. It is prettier than harps. I listen and I learn, transmogrifying myself into a butterfly flitting from note to note, enjoying the view.

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Date: 4/24/2021 9:04:00 PM
This is enchanting, Caren! I loved it throughout, but especially the last two lines.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/24/2021 9:40:00 PM
Thank you very much
Date: 4/24/2021 11:12:00 AM
Another nice write, Caren. Earlier, you said Shakespeare was way over your head. Check this out: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FxqXN7umwN0
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/24/2021 9:40:00 PM
I will Robert Thanks
Date: 4/24/2021 10:29:00 AM
I so enjoyed this poem, Caren. Lovely imagery and fine tribute to Lyn.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/24/2021 9:40:00 PM
Thank you L Milton
Date: 4/24/2021 9:32:00 AM
Lynn did a great job with that piece as you did too with this tribute. I liked it. - Ken
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/24/2021 9:41:00 PM
It was like the voice of an angel for real

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