Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Moonbeams Gently Cascade

~Moonbeams Gently Cascade~

Watching as the daylight begins 
to melt into twilight 
Listening for the soft lullaby 
the stars would incite
Cradling me in their warm 
brilliant effervescent glow
To rock me gently, to their 
mesmerizing melody so slow
When these vibrating heavenly 
bodies, lull me to sleep
Star dust hangs over me in 
forms of  counting sheep
Angels sing the lullaby in this 
heavenly celestial choir
Stroking oh so softly the purest, 
of mankind's desires
Lullaby on a celestial breeze 
as my soul it serenades 
Drifting off to heaven as 
moonbeams gently cascade


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L. J. Carber December 23, 2019 at 4:19 PM Lovely. Brenda--congrats on your win! Brenda Chiri December 24, 2019 at 9:49 AM LJ thank you so much!;)

Sam Kauffman December 22, 2019 at 6:04 PM Hi Brenda, This is quite lovely - gentle as twilight. Congrats on your win. Brenda Chiri December 22, 2019 at 8:13 PM Thank you Sam!;)

Na Na December 22, 2019 at 3:20 PM Congrats on your winning poem Brenda Brenda Chiri December 22, 2019 at 3:24 PM Thank you Gregory!;)

Edward Ibeh December 22, 2019 at 11:20 AM Beautiful poem, Brenda:-) Congratulations on your win! Brenda Chiri December 22, 2019 at 2:50 PM Thank you so much!;)

Jennifer Proxenos November 25, 2019 at 7:30 AM What a soothing poem Brenda, I love the rhythm of it, and your poetic creativity as always shines in this write. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Brenda Chiri November 25, 2019 at 9:56 AM Thank you Jennifer! Appreciate your comment!;) plus your visit!;)

Pace Ink-U-Script November 24, 2019 at 6:30 AM Loving the tune to this piece of art penned here Brenda. I’ve been missing out! INK Brenda Chiri November 24, 2019 at 7:22 AM I'm so glad you loved it G! Really I was thinking what it would be like falling asleep next to someone and being that comfortable! Thank you!;)

Gordon Mcconnell November 21, 2019 at 4:19 PM Lovely penning Brenda, nice imagery and good construction . Hope this finds you on a good side, have a real good one, Gordon Brenda Chiri November 21, 2019 at 8:09 PM Gordon thank you my dear friend for continually stopping by my little piece of the soup!;)

John Hamilton November 21, 2019 at 3:33 PM Sweet words that feel like a lullaby, well done Brenda, enjoyed every word! Brenda Chiri November 21, 2019 at 8:08 PM I did kinda write it as a lullaby didn't I! Lol! Like that would help me get my sleep! Lol thank you so much John!;)

Matthew Anish November 21, 2019 at 12:37 PM Sweet words! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Brenda Chiri November 21, 2019 at 8:07 PM Matthew thank you so much!;)

Ts Poetry November 21, 2019 at 11:38 AM Angels are the mother of Earth, nice B Brenda Chiri November 21, 2019 at 8:07 PM Thanks T!;)

Regina Mcintosh November 21, 2019 at 8:22 AM Love this. You're a wonderful writer, dear friend. Love to you, Gina Brenda Chiri November 21, 2019 at 8:06 PM Regina thank you so much!;)

Na Na November 20, 2019 at 11:41 PM Hi Brenda this is beautiful, ty for sharing Brenda Chiri November 21, 2019 at 8:00 AM Thank you Gregory so very much!;)