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Moonbeams Gently Cascade

~Moonbeams Gently Cascade~ Watching as the daylight begins to melt into twilight Listening for the soft lullaby the stars would incite Cradling me in their warm brilliant effervescent glow To rock me gently, to their mesmerizing melody so slow When these vibrating heavenly bodies, lull me to sleep Star dust hangs over me in forms of counting sheep Angels sing the lullaby in this heavenly celestial choir Stroking oh so softly the purest, of mankind's desires Lullaby on a celestial breeze as my soul it serenades Drifting off to heaven as moonbeams gently cascade
2nd place STRAND SPECIAL 7,any form ,any theme' Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 12/23/2019 4:19:00 PM
Lovely. Brenda--congrats on your win!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/24/2019 9:49:00 AM
LJ thank you so much!;)
Date: 12/22/2019 6:04:00 PM
Hi Brenda, This is quite lovely - gentle as twilight. Congrats on your win.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/22/2019 8:13:00 PM
Thank you Sam!;)
Date: 12/22/2019 3:20:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Brenda
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/22/2019 3:24:00 PM
Thank you Gregory!;)
Date: 12/22/2019 11:20:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Brenda:-) Congratulations on your win!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/22/2019 2:50:00 PM
Thank you so much!;)
Date: 11/25/2019 7:30:00 AM
What a soothing poem Brenda, I love the rhythm of it, and your poetic creativity as always shines in this write. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/25/2019 9:56:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer! Appreciate your comment!;) plus your visit!;)
Date: 11/24/2019 6:30:00 AM
Loving the tune to this piece of art penned here Brenda. I’ve been missing out! INK
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/24/2019 7:22:00 AM
I'm so glad you loved it G! Really I was thinking what it would be like falling asleep next to someone and being that comfortable! Thank you!;)
Date: 11/21/2019 4:19:00 PM
Lovely penning Brenda, nice imagery and good construction . Hope this finds you on a good side, have a real good one, Gordon
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/21/2019 8:09:00 PM
Gordon thank you my dear friend for continually stopping by my little piece of the soup!;)
Date: 11/21/2019 3:33:00 PM
Sweet words that feel like a lullaby, well done Brenda, enjoyed every word!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/21/2019 8:08:00 PM
I did kinda write it as a lullaby didn't I! Lol! Like that would help me get my sleep! Lol thank you so much John!;)
Date: 11/21/2019 12:37:00 PM
Sweet words! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/21/2019 8:07:00 PM
Matthew thank you so much!;)
Date: 11/21/2019 11:38:00 AM
Angels are the mother of Earth, nice B
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/21/2019 8:07:00 PM
Thanks T!;)
Date: 11/21/2019 8:22:00 AM
Love this. You're a wonderful writer, dear friend. Love to you, Gina
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/21/2019 8:06:00 PM
Regina thank you so much!;)
Date: 11/20/2019 11:41:00 PM
Hi Brenda this is beautiful, ty for sharing
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/21/2019 8:00:00 AM
Thank you Gregory so very much!;)

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