Moonbeams and Promises

~ Moonbeams and promises softly they weave Here in the twilight if you will believe Whispers on breezes through pine scented air Two hearts together these moments to share Holding you closely a night such as this Seeking your lips and the warmth of your kiss Soft as a feather and sweet buttercream Lingering here in the midst of a dream Moist and inviting, so breathless my sighs Lost in the feeling neath December skies Supple and tender a wish that’s come true Perfect this evening alone here with you ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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December 18, 2019 at 11:55 PM
This is a lovely, sensual piece, my friend, that I think could win the kissing contest poetry contest...mm! A fave.
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December 19, 2019 at 8:23 AM
Thanks for the fave my friend. I appreciate that. Not going to enter it in the contest but I am happy you think it would be a good fit.
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December 17, 2019 at 6:29 PM
Wow this so beautifully penned! I love this!
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December 18, 2019 at 7:28 AM
Thank you Amanda, I appreciate your kind thoughts on my poem.
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December 17, 2019 at 3:30 PM
WoW! Chris, You penned a lovely December sky. And it looks amazing. I found this write to be well written, and romantic. Your imagery was just breathtaking. I know I'm going to view something amazing when I read you. Well done. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis
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December 17, 2019 at 3:35 PM
Thank you so much my friend. I am happy you enjoyed this one.
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December 17, 2019 at 2:46 PM
Lovely. So full of incredible imagery. Ann
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December 17, 2019 at 2:53 PM
Thank you so much Ann
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December 17, 2019 at 1:36 PM
It does sound perfect, Chris. Well written :)
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December 17, 2019 at 1:40 PM
Thank you again Heidi. I always smile when you stop by.
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December 17, 2019 at 4:28 AM
A wonderfully penned romantic poem Chris! :)
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December 17, 2019 at 6:59 AM
Thank you so very much Tania.
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December 16, 2019 at 6:47 PM
sigh...so enchanting Chris...it's tender and romantic, and floats across the page with such finesse that it makes me wish i could see the moon on this rainy evening...Good night my friend! :) hugs
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December 17, 2019 at 6:58 AM
Thank you so very much my friend. I am thrilled you enjoyed this. Hoping that rain ends soon.
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December 16, 2019 at 5:39 PM
romantically envisioned universally submission, well done my friend
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December 17, 2019 at 6:58 AM
Thanks so very much Greg.
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December 16, 2019 at 5:27 PM
Gorgeous as ever. For poetry, you are king of romantic dreams!!
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December 17, 2019 at 3:32 PM
I totally agree:-) Alexis
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December 17, 2019 at 6:58 AM
Thank you so much Andrea. What a nice thing to say.
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