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Moonbeams and Promises

~ Moonbeams and promises softly they weave Here in the twilight if you will believe Whispers on breezes through pine scented air Two hearts together these moments to share Holding you closely a night such as this Seeking your lips and the warmth of your kiss Soft as a feather and sweet buttercream Lingering here in the midst of a dream Moist and inviting, so breathless my sighs Lost in the feeling neath December skies Supple and tender a wish that’s come true Perfect this evening alone here with you ~

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Date: 12/18/2019 11:55:00 PM
This is a lovely, sensual piece, my friend, that I think could win the kissing contest poetry contest...mm! A fave.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2019 8:23:00 AM
Thanks for the fave my friend. I appreciate that. Not going to enter it in the contest but I am happy you think it would be a good fit.
Date: 12/17/2019 6:29:00 PM
Wow this so beautifully penned! I love this!
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Chris Green
Date: 12/18/2019 7:28:00 AM
Thank you Amanda, I appreciate your kind thoughts on my poem.
Date: 12/17/2019 3:30:00 PM
WoW! Chris, You penned a lovely December sky. And it looks amazing. I found this write to be well written, and romantic. Your imagery was just breathtaking. I know I'm going to view something amazing when I read you. Well done. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 12/17/2019 3:35:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend. I am happy you enjoyed this one.
Date: 12/17/2019 2:46:00 PM
Lovely. So full of incredible imagery. Ann
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Chris Green
Date: 12/17/2019 2:53:00 PM
Thank you so much Ann
Date: 12/17/2019 1:36:00 PM
It does sound perfect, Chris. Well written :)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/17/2019 1:40:00 PM
Thank you again Heidi. I always smile when you stop by.
Date: 12/17/2019 4:28:00 AM
A wonderfully penned romantic poem Chris! :)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/17/2019 6:59:00 AM
Thank you so very much Tania.
Date: 12/16/2019 6:47:00 PM
sigh...so enchanting Chris...it's tender and romantic, and floats across the page with such finesse that it makes me wish i could see the moon on this rainy evening...Good night my friend! :) hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 12/17/2019 6:58:00 AM
Thank you so very much my friend. I am thrilled you enjoyed this. Hoping that rain ends soon.
Date: 12/16/2019 5:39:00 PM
romantically envisioned universally submission, well done my friend
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Chris Green
Date: 12/17/2019 6:58:00 AM
Thanks so very much Greg.
Date: 12/16/2019 5:27:00 PM
Gorgeous as ever. For poetry, you are king of romantic dreams!!
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Alexis Y.
Date: 12/17/2019 3:32:00 PM
I totally agree:-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 12/17/2019 6:58:00 AM
Thank you so much Andrea. What a nice thing to say.

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