Sara Kendrick Poet Triolet

Moonbeams

The moonbeams crossed the horizon
Carrying the sun in its wake
Soft light 'pon the grass like diamonds
The moonbeams crossed the horizon 
Caressing each scrutiny wizened 
Opaque hopes and moods forsake
The moonbeams crossed the horizon
Carrying the sun in its wake

Written: September 25, 2014
Sponsor: Alfred Vassallo
Contest: One New Triolet

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Derek Noble Ayi August 7, 2017 at 9:44 AM Good, very deep Sara Kendrick August 7, 2017 at 4:51 PM Derek, Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the kind review..Sara

Jim Joyce October 29, 2014 at 3:37 PM ah a magical poem ..love the simplicity of it

Darlene Gifford October 3, 2014 at 2:54 PM Loved your 3rd line, among others. Watching the moonbeams do their magic is a special time of day. Blessings, Darlene

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 29, 2014 at 7:15 PM Enthralling view Sara...:) when I read a triolet from you, Andie and Alfred to mention a few... Well you really make me sway with your words too..:)

Maurice Yvonne September 27, 2014 at 5:10 PM Brilliant! Congratulations on being the poem of the day.

Bl Devnath September 27, 2014 at 11:22 AM Congrats on the poem being the poem of the day, my sweet friend. It's a nice poem of nice vision. Good luck in the contest. Loved always,bl

Tim Smith September 27, 2014 at 9:11 AM Congrats on the poem of the day....hugs

Casarah Nance September 27, 2014 at 7:28 AM Lovely choice for the poem of the day, well done. :)

Jan Allison September 27, 2014 at 2:50 AM many congrats on poem of the day - lovely to read this delightful poem again:-) hugs jan xx

Verlena S. Walker September 27, 2014 at 2:14 AM Sara, congratulations on the poem of the day... Verlena

Brenda Meier-Hans September 27, 2014 at 1:22 AM Congratulations on Poem of the day with this lovely Triolet Sara.

Debbie Guzzi September 26, 2014 at 7:20 PM Love this Sara I'm faving it! Light & love

Liam Mcdaid September 26, 2014 at 4:32 PM beautiful vision painted sara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 25, 2014 at 11:25 AM Soothing triolet Sara! Love poems on moon always! Good luck in contest!

Dr.Ram Mehta September 25, 2014 at 9:21 AM Very pleasing picture created here, sara.

Barbara Gorelick September 25, 2014 at 8:48 AM What a lovely poem for this gray morning. Hope all is well. BG

Jan Allison September 25, 2014 at 7:48 AM beautiful triolet Sara I have never tried this form and have now written my first one for the contest:-) Good luck:-) Hugs Jan xxx Sara Kendrick August 7, 2017 at 4:50 PM Jan, Wonderful that you have tried the form for we all need to try different kinds of poetry..Sara