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Moonbeams

The moonbeams crossed the horizon
Carrying the sun in its wake
Soft light 'pon the grass like diamonds
The moonbeams crossed the horizon 
Caressing each scrutiny wizened 
Opaque hopes and moods forsake
The moonbeams crossed the horizon
Carrying the sun in its wake

Written: September 25, 2014
Sponsor: Alfred Vassallo
Contest: One New Triolet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/7/2017 9:44:00 AM
Good, very deep
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/7/2017 4:51:00 PM
Derek, Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the kind review..Sara
Date: 10/29/2014 3:37:00 PM
ah a magical poem ..love the simplicity of it
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Date: 10/3/2014 2:54:00 PM
Loved your 3rd line, among others. Watching the moonbeams do their magic is a special time of day. Blessings, Darlene
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Date: 9/29/2014 7:15:00 PM
Enthralling view Sara...:) when I read a triolet from you, Andie and Alfred to mention a few... Well you really make me sway with your words too..:)
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Date: 9/27/2014 5:10:00 PM
Brilliant! Congratulations on being the poem of the day.
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Date: 9/27/2014 11:22:00 AM
Congrats on the poem being the poem of the day, my sweet friend. It's a nice poem of nice vision. Good luck in the contest. Loved always,bl
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Date: 9/27/2014 9:11:00 AM
Congrats on the poem of the day....hugs
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Date: 9/27/2014 7:28:00 AM
Lovely choice for the poem of the day, well done. :)
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Date: 9/27/2014 2:50:00 AM
many congrats on poem of the day - lovely to read this delightful poem again:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/27/2014 2:14:00 AM
Sara, congratulations on the poem of the day... Verlena
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Date: 9/27/2014 1:22:00 AM
Congratulations on Poem of the day with this lovely Triolet Sara.
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Date: 9/26/2014 7:20:00 PM
Love this Sara I'm faving it! Light & love
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Date: 9/26/2014 4:32:00 PM
beautiful vision painted sara
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Date: 9/25/2014 11:25:00 AM
Soothing triolet Sara! Love poems on moon always! Good luck in contest!
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Date: 9/25/2014 9:21:00 AM
Very pleasing picture created here, sara.
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Date: 9/25/2014 8:48:00 AM
What a lovely poem for this gray morning. Hope all is well. BG
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Date: 9/25/2014 7:48:00 AM
beautiful triolet Sara I have never tried this form and have now written my first one for the contest:-) Good luck:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/7/2017 4:50:00 PM
Jan, Wonderful that you have tried the form for we all need to try different kinds of poetry..Sara