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Moonbeams

The moonbeams crossed the horizon
Carrying the sun in its wake
Soft light 'pon the grass like diamonds
The moonbeams crossed the horizon 
Caressing each scrutiny wizened 
Opaque hopes and moods forsake
The moonbeams crossed the horizon
Carrying the sun in its wake

Written: September 25, 2014
Sponsor: Alfred Vassallo
Contest: One New Triolet

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2014

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Derek Noble Ayi Date: 8/7/2017 9:44:00 AM Good, very deep Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/7/2017 4:51:00 PM Derek, Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the kind review..Sara

Jim Joyce Date: 10/29/2014 3:37:00 PM ah a magical poem ..love the simplicity of it Login to Reply

Darlene Gifford Date: 10/3/2014 2:54:00 PM Loved your 3rd line, among others. Watching the moonbeams do their magic is a special time of day. Blessings, Darlene Login to Reply

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/29/2014 7:15:00 PM Enthralling view Sara...:) when I read a triolet from you, Andie and Alfred to mention a few... Well you really make me sway with your words too..:) Login to Reply

Maurice Yvonne Date: 9/27/2014 5:10:00 PM Brilliant! Congratulations on being the poem of the day. Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 9/27/2014 11:22:00 AM Congrats on the poem being the poem of the day, my sweet friend. It's a nice poem of nice vision. Good luck in the contest. Loved always,bl Login to Reply

Tim Smith Date: 9/27/2014 9:11:00 AM Congrats on the poem of the day....hugs Login to Reply

Casarah Nance Date: 9/27/2014 7:28:00 AM Lovely choice for the poem of the day, well done. :) Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 9/27/2014 2:50:00 AM many congrats on poem of the day - lovely to read this delightful poem again:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Verlena S. Walker Date: 9/27/2014 2:14:00 AM Sara, congratulations on the poem of the day... Verlena Login to Reply

Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 9/27/2014 1:22:00 AM Congratulations on Poem of the day with this lovely Triolet Sara. Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 9/26/2014 7:20:00 PM Love this Sara I'm faving it! Light & love Login to Reply

Liam Mcdaid Date: 9/26/2014 4:32:00 PM beautiful vision painted sara Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 9/25/2014 11:25:00 AM Soothing triolet Sara! Love poems on moon always! Good luck in contest! Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/25/2014 9:21:00 AM Very pleasing picture created here, sara. Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 9/25/2014 8:48:00 AM What a lovely poem for this gray morning. Hope all is well. BG Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 9/25/2014 7:48:00 AM beautiful triolet Sara I have never tried this form and have now written my first one for the contest:-) Good luck:-) Hugs Jan xxx Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/7/2017 4:50:00 PM Jan, Wonderful that you have tried the form for we all need to try different kinds of poetry..Sara