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Moonbeams

Going down dimly lit street The cobblestones wet The moonbeams are out tonight The mood is all set Nobody is around There’s a bit of fog floating Quiet does abound Russell Sivey Form Seguidilla

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Jack Horne

Date: 11/25/2012 7:14:00 AM

I love foggy nights - awesome descriptions, Russell - I could just put myself there

Don Johnson

Date: 11/24/2012 11:43:00 PM

an Jack the Ripper, is waiting to meet, the blood lust is in him, her death still incomplete ... sorry mate hehehe

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/24/2012 8:38:00 AM

I enjoy this fine scene and mood for it that you set here, Russell.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/23/2012 2:01:00 PM

I was in Rome this past October. Lots of streets just like this, except the fog part. We wandered the streets at 2 in the morning. It felt kind of creepy without people on the streets. It made for some great photo's

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/23/2012 1:58:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this one..It creates a scene that I feel I am a part of this day..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Sara