Moonbeam Smile - Tet

Smile On your Crystal face Moonbeam ripples Set dulcet rhythm of dance in my heart beat. I travelled a long way drenched in moon dust With lost gem’s glint I now walk The last Mile.
April 26, 2019 Syllable count checked on howmanysyllables.com
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Roper Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 4:04 PM
Congratulations on your Tetractys form win. Hugs eve
Dietrich Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 2:32 PM
this is just wonderful and so poetic. Congrats for the win, Subimal.
Y. Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 8:43 AM
Hi Subimal, You have painted such a lovely image with words. Congratulations on your fine win:-) Alexis
Andresen Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 8:24 AM
- Congratulations :)
Messina Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 7:27 AM
Absolutely beautiful, Subimal. Congratulations on your 1st place win..Charlie
Awtry Avatar
May 1, 2019 at 11:27 AM
Subimal, this is simply gorgeous! Reads like a winner for sure :)
Andresen Avatar
April 27, 2019 at 1:49 PM
- Lovely written, Subimal :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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