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MOON WHISPERS



the full moon dangles low tonight
and whispers sweetly in my ear
memories of fiery delight  
the full moon dangles low tonight
graceful herons glide in full flight   
I’d trade them all to hold you near
the full moon dangles low tonight
and whispers sweetly in my ear



Submitted on November 15, 2018, for contest  LATE NOVEMBER sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST

and June 12, 2018, for contest MOON POETRY sponsored by KEVIN SHAW

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/20/2018 9:29:00 AM
Sweet, Line, truly a sweet poem! Congrats on your win in Brian's coontest
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/20/2018 2:16:00 PM
Thank you so much, LJ. Most appreciated.
Date: 11/19/2018 2:37:00 PM
Such a lovely Triolet, Line. Congrats on your fine placement! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/19/2018 4:32:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra. Most appreciated.
Date: 11/19/2018 1:43:00 PM
Your beautiful tribute to lovely Luna glows bright Line! Congratulations on your top win in Brian's contest! xxoo : )
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Date: 11/19/2018 1:52:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie. Your visit and comment are most appreciated.
Date: 11/18/2018 10:54:00 AM
Fantastic poem with vivid imagery, Line!:-) Heartiest congratulations on a well-deserved win!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/18/2018 11:05:00 AM
Thank you for your most appreciated visit and compliment, Edward.
Date: 10/4/2018 7:35:00 PM
I found this in a search on the name I wish to give my efforts in online journalism. And it's beautiful. It fits well my aspiration to memorize and recite, following Invictus. May I quote this poem on my weblog http://voland0.xyz/weblog ?
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/4/2018 9:27:00 PM
Sure. Go ahead, Bolan. I am flattered that you liked my poem enough to ask for permission. Best wishes on all your endeavours. Line xx
Date: 6/13/2018 1:32:00 PM
I've not heard of this form, Line. I really like it. Beautiful xxoo
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/13/2018 4:04:00 PM
Thanks, Mike. It is wonderful. I like it a lot.
Date: 6/13/2018 4:05:00 AM
Very nice triolet Line
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/13/2018 9:44:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph. Most appreciated.
Date: 6/13/2018 12:59:00 AM
A triolet! I had never heard of this kind of poem. It is nice, but seems a bit tricky. Good luck in the contest,Line.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/13/2018 9:42:00 AM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren. Much appreciated.
Date: 6/12/2018 9:50:00 PM
Lovely images distract but a moment!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/13/2018 9:43:00 AM
True, Kim. Thanks for your lovely visit.
Date: 6/12/2018 9:43:00 PM
This is a pleasant write in a more difficult form. Very well done, Line! Mine is just plain silliness.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/13/2018 9:44:00 AM
Well the contest asked for humour --- mine is VERY VERY VERY subtle. I read yours and it was hilarious and should do extremely well.