Line Gauthier Poet Triolet

Moon Whispers

the full moon dangles low tonight
and whispers sweetly in my ear
memories of fiery delight  
the full moon dangles low tonight
graceful herons glide in full flight   
I’d trade them all to hold you near
the full moon dangles low tonight
and whispers sweetly in my ear



AP: 1st place 2020

Submitted on November 15, 2018 for contest LATE NOVEMBER sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST

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L. J. Carber November 20, 2018 at 9:29 AM Sweet, Line, truly a sweet poem! Congrats on your win in Brian's coontest Line Gauthier November 20, 2018 at 2:16 PM Thank you so much, LJ. Most appreciated.

Sandra Haight November 19, 2018 at 2:37 PM Such a lovely Triolet, Line. Congrats on your fine placement! Hugs, Sandra Line Gauthier November 19, 2018 at 4:32 PM Thank you so much, Sandra. Most appreciated.

Connie Marcum Wong November 19, 2018 at 1:43 PM Your beautiful tribute to lovely Luna glows bright Line! Congratulations on your top win in Brian's contest! xxoo : ) Line Gauthier November 19, 2018 at 1:52 PM Thank you so much, Connie. Your visit and comment are most appreciated.

Edward Ibeh November 18, 2018 at 10:54 AM Fantastic poem with vivid imagery, Line!:-) Heartiest congratulations on a well-deserved win! Line Gauthier November 18, 2018 at 11:05 AM Thank you for your most appreciated visit and compliment, Edward.

Bolan Moonward October 4, 2018 at 7:35 PM I found this in a search on the name I wish to give my efforts in online journalism. And it's beautiful. It fits well my aspiration to memorize and recite, following Invictus. May I quote this poem on my weblog http://voland0.xyz/weblog ? Line Gauthier October 4, 2018 at 9:27 PM Sure. Go ahead, Bolan. I am flattered that you liked my poem enough to ask for permission. Best wishes on all your endeavours. Line xx

Mike Gentile June 13, 2018 at 1:32 PM I've not heard of this form, Line. I really like it. Beautiful xxoo Line Gauthier June 13, 2018 at 4:04 PM Thanks, Mike. It is wonderful. I like it a lot.

Joseph May June 13, 2018 at 4:05 AM Very nice triolet Line Line Gauthier June 13, 2018 at 9:44 AM Thank you, Joseph. Most appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger June 13, 2018 at 12:59 AM A triolet! I had never heard of this kind of poem. It is nice, but seems a bit tricky. Good luck in the contest,Line. Line Gauthier June 13, 2018 at 9:42 AM Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren. Much appreciated.

Kim Rodrigues June 12, 2018 at 9:50 PM Lovely images distract but a moment! Line Gauthier June 13, 2018 at 9:43 AM True, Kim. Thanks for your lovely visit.