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Moon Waltz

We waltz~ 'neath August moon with the fruity fig trees that synchronously sway with us. The mystique moon~ in its crescent phase a smiling sparkle in the sky as we dance through the night. Your hands~ holding mine are like pillars of pious promises~ to have and to hold. Your eyes~ that exude stardust in the dimly luminous light of empyrean aura lead me~ to a road of no return. 27 August 2020 STRAND COMPLETELY NEW (27) ,any form,any theme Contest Judged: 8/27/2020 11:43:00 AM Sponsored by: Brian Strand 1st place

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Date: 10/12/2020 1:36:00 AM
The midnight dance with the moon above. Hand in hand, safety net released and love is blooming for the dancing moon. Outstanding poetry shared. You make me want to write. A amazing poem.
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Date: 8/30/2020 4:29:00 AM
Puts me in mind of a madly frantic waltz that has no end...two lovers condemned to dance together forever. Should that be a curse or a blessing? You have imparted an almost fairytale sense of dark, magical intrigue here...certainly dramatic. It is if the dancers have one chance, and one chance only, of breaking the powerful spell...and if they fail? Well, the consequences too dire to contemplate. Powerful stuff, J.C, intended or not. Will visit again soon. All my very best wishes! :) john
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Date: 8/29/2020 6:13:00 PM
Gorgeously romantic, my friend!! and I see it's another win. WEll deserved and Congratulations.
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Date: 8/29/2020 10:09:00 AM
sounds lovely and so romantic...
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Date: 8/28/2020 1:39:00 PM
Perfect romantic poetry from start to finish. Congrats on your win, J! ~ John
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Date: 8/28/2020 6:03:00 AM
Truly vivid images - no need to return! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/27/2020 2:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A great open, "We waltz." A beautiful waltz write/poem right to the end. Enjoy your win and day.....................
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Date: 8/27/2020 12:52:00 PM
I am honored to be the first to comment on this delicate love poem shimmering with moonlight, JCB! Love your last line - "road of no return." Congratulations on your first place win!
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