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Premiere Contest - 1410 Rhyme Time  

Sponsor: Brian Strand 

Judged: 8th September, 2025

5th Place

Moon Swoon

lovers admire our silver-buttered moon,
whose flatteries have led the clouds to swoon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Swan Avatar
September 15, 2025 at 5:06 AM
And the clouds chase the moon...(which is exposed as a rock-potato when 'butter-free' during an eclipse. I enjoyed reading this. J :)
George Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 8:59 PM
Congratulations Trina on your win. 'silver- buttered moon'... is something catchy.
Layne Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 8:15 PM
Thanks! We've had some lovely full moons here recently. I just wanted to share that.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 7:59 PM
Very nice, Trina!
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