Moon Spoon

It was a lovely sight gazing at the curved moon 
Spooning with the tumultuous waves of the sea
I was walking along the lonely beach when this
Moon spooning called me and arrested my look
The night rapt in painting illusion in its universe


Now the moon chuckling and cuddling the crest
Next minute the crest spooning with the moon
Impatient to grow in glee to its full a golden orb
A perfect solitariness except the surreal sounds
Of tide rising to pulverize the moon on the sand


I keep gazing at the moon’s pretty bright cheek
The two moon spoons like dimples with drops of
Turquoise sea from the finger like Greek creeks
As if Pablo Picasso is painting the lovely spoons
Of liquid light raising a beauty of hide-and-seek 


The world nowadays is mostly a place of pain
The scene of delight therefore was enchanting
I enjoyed as long as I could wait and quench
Then I put it in the pulsating pink treasure box 
As an aim to dwell on to keep boredom at bay


October 30, 2017
For the Contest: Moon Spoon
Sponsored by :Kai Michael Neumann
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Bateman Avatar
December 3, 2017 at 11:16 AM
Hello Probir, Thanks very much for your comment on one of my recent poems. "Moon Spoon" here is a true delight to read!! You take the reader along on a wondrously articulated and image-laden adventure as you reveal the essence and enjoyment of "Moon Spooning." And the reference to Pablo Picasso is another perfect touch. Outstanding Write!! A FAVE TOO!! Best Wishes Always, Gary
Gupta Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 5:48 AM
Thank you, Gary for your descriptive comment ... I feel encouraged ...
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 3:30 PM
Probr you paint a pretty scene with your words. A beautiful written poem. I enjoyed reading. Have a nice evening my friend.
Gupta Avatar
December 1, 2017 at 8:53 AM
Thank you, Darlene ...
Gauthier Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 8:04 PM
Congrats on your win, Probir. Well done.
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December 1, 2017 at 8:52 AM
Thank you, Line ...
Haight Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 6:42 PM
A great poem, Probir! Congratulations on your nice placement on this short list of winners in the contest! Sandra
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December 1, 2017 at 8:51 AM
Thank you, Sandra for your kind words ...
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November 18, 2017 at 5:08 AM
Best wishes and congrats on your placement, Probir ... keep writing, friend! :-)
Gupta Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 7:48 AM
Thank you, Gregory ...
Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 8:27 AM
Lovely images. I love your introductory lines! Congratulations Probir!
Gupta Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 7:49 AM
Thanks, Kim ...
Neumann Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 2:20 AM
Wonderful. Congratulations. I like the pink treasure box...Kai
Gupta Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 6:51 AM
Thank you very much, Kai ... I am very glad you liked it ...
Roper Avatar
November 2, 2017 at 8:59 PM
Wonderful write, Probir Hugs Eve ~`*
Gupta Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 3:29 AM
Thank you, Eve ...
Ashley Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 9:05 PM
This is quite a beautiful and sensual poem Probir with scintillating imagery in ravishing lines. Love it. Good luck in the contest!!
Gupta Avatar
November 2, 2017 at 9:43 AM
Thank you, Susan for your assessing opinion ...
Pandit Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 11:35 AM
So well crafted Probir--a lovely poem--best for a win!
Gupta Avatar
November 2, 2017 at 9:45 AM
Thank you, Vijay ...
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