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Moon Spoon

It was a lovely sight gazing at the curved moon Spooning with the tumultuous waves of the sea I was walking along the lonely beach when this Moon spooning called me and arrested my look The night rapt in painting illusion in its universe Now the moon chuckling and cuddling the crest Next minute the crest spooning with the moon Impatient to grow in glee to its full a golden orb A perfect solitariness except the surreal sounds Of tide rising to pulverize the moon on the sand I keep gazing at the moon’s pretty bright cheek The two moon spoons like dimples with drops of Turquoise sea from the finger like Greek creeks As if Pablo Picasso is painting the lovely spoons Of liquid light raising a beauty of hide-and-seek The world nowadays is mostly a place of pain The scene of delight therefore was enchanting I enjoyed as long as I could wait and quench Then I put it in the pulsating pink treasure box As an aim to dwell on to keep boredom at bay October 30, 2017 For the Contest: Moon Spoon Sponsored by :Kai Michael Neumann

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Date: 12/3/2017 11:16:00 AM
Hello Probir, Thanks very much for your comment on one of my recent poems. "Moon Spoon" here is a true delight to read!! You take the reader along on a wondrously articulated and image-laden adventure as you reveal the essence and enjoyment of "Moon Spooning." And the reference to Pablo Picasso is another perfect touch. Outstanding Write!! A FAVE TOO!! Best Wishes Always, Gary
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Date: 12/4/2017 5:48:00 AM
Thank you, Gary for your descriptive comment ... I feel encouraged ...
Date: 11/29/2017 3:30:00 PM
Probr you paint a pretty scene with your words. A beautiful written poem. I enjoyed reading. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 12/1/2017 8:53:00 AM
Thank you, Darlene ...
Date: 11/18/2017 8:04:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Probir. Well done.
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Date: 12/1/2017 8:52:00 AM
Thank you, Line ...
Date: 11/18/2017 6:42:00 PM
A great poem, Probir! Congratulations on your nice placement on this short list of winners in the contest! Sandra
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/1/2017 8:51:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra for your kind words ...
Date: 11/18/2017 5:08:00 AM
Best wishes and congrats on your placement, Probir ... keep writing, friend! :-)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/18/2017 7:48:00 AM
Thank you, Gregory ...
Date: 11/17/2017 8:27:00 AM
Lovely images. I love your introductory lines! Congratulations Probir!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/18/2017 7:49:00 AM
Thanks, Kim ...
Date: 11/17/2017 2:20:00 AM
Wonderful. Congratulations. I like the pink treasure box...Kai
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/17/2017 6:51:00 AM
Thank you very much, Kai ... I am very glad you liked it ...
Date: 11/2/2017 8:59:00 PM
Wonderful write, Probir Hugs Eve ~`*
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/5/2017 3:29:00 AM
Thank you, Eve ...
Date: 10/30/2017 9:05:00 PM
This is quite a beautiful and sensual poem Probir with scintillating imagery in ravishing lines. Love it. Good luck in the contest!!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/2/2017 9:43:00 AM
Thank you, Susan for your assessing opinion ...
Date: 10/30/2017 11:35:00 AM
So well crafted Probir--a lovely poem--best for a win!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/2/2017 9:45:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay ...

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