Darren White Poet Free verse

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Moon Spoon

Small crescent loosely wraps two arms around me.
An open invitation, without bars.
Freedom, I revel in its warmth and light.

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N/A in contest: Moon Spoon
Sponsor: Kai Michael Neumann

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Andrea Dietrich December 22, 2016 at 8:15 PM this has a lovely warm feeling to it, DArren. Good luck in the contest. Darren White December 22, 2016 at 11:49 PM I love my little 3-liner, but in all honesty Andrea? Yours is WAAAAAY better :)

Claudia Polydoro December 22, 2016 at 8:07 PM Aww this is sweet :) good luck on the contest, Darren... Darren White December 22, 2016 at 11:48 PM Thanks Claudia :)

Deborah Burch December 22, 2016 at 2:58 AM Nicely done Darren!! Such a romantic. Big Hugggs. Deb ;) Darren White December 22, 2016 at 3:00 AM Aren't I ;)... Hugs, Darren :)

Tamal Kundu December 21, 2016 at 10:58 PM Beautiful imagery, Darren. Darren White December 21, 2016 at 11:51 PM Thanks, my friend :)

Joanna Daniel December 21, 2016 at 7:41 AM Very nice, Darren:) the moon really inspires our muses:) Darren White December 21, 2016 at 7:48 AM Thank you, Jo, I love moon and starry nights :)

Heidi Sands December 21, 2016 at 7:36 AM Very nice Darren :) Darren White December 21, 2016 at 7:39 AM Heidi, thank you :)

Supraja Kannan December 21, 2016 at 7:20 AM So beautifully written... A 7... Darren White December 21, 2016 at 7:28 AM Supraja, a 7? Thank you!

Chris Green December 21, 2016 at 6:02 AM Very beautiful Darren and so true, the moon does wrap us in its arms and it costs nothing to feel this wonder. Nicely done my friend. Darren White December 21, 2016 at 6:04 AM Thanks, my friend :)

Anne-Lise Andresen December 21, 2016 at 5:22 AM - Beautifully written, Darren - Good luck in the contest - Best wishes for a peaceful and beautiful Christmas to you and your family :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Darren White December 21, 2016 at 5:48 AM Thanks Anne-Lise, and the same wishes from me to you :)