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Small crescent loosely wraps two arms around me. An open invitation, without bars. Freedom, I revel in its warmth and light. *** N/A in contest: Moon Spoon Sponsor: Kai Michael Neumann

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/22/2016 8:15:00 PM
this has a lovely warm feeling to it, DArren. Good luck in the contest.
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Darren White
Date: 12/22/2016 11:49:00 PM
I love my little 3-liner, but in all honesty Andrea? Yours is WAAAAAY better :)
Date: 12/22/2016 8:07:00 PM
Aww this is sweet :) good luck on the contest, Darren...
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Darren White
Date: 12/22/2016 11:48:00 PM
Thanks Claudia :)
Date: 12/22/2016 2:58:00 AM
Nicely done Darren!! Such a romantic. Big Hugggs. Deb ;)
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Darren White
Date: 12/22/2016 3:00:00 AM
Aren't I ;)... Hugs, Darren :)
Date: 12/21/2016 10:58:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Darren.
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Darren White
Date: 12/21/2016 11:51:00 PM
Thanks, my friend :)
Date: 12/21/2016 7:41:00 AM
Very nice, Darren:) the moon really inspires our muses:)
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Darren White
Date: 12/21/2016 7:48:00 AM
Thank you, Jo, I love moon and starry nights :)
Date: 12/21/2016 7:36:00 AM
Very nice Darren :)
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Darren White
Date: 12/21/2016 7:39:00 AM
Heidi, thank you :)
Date: 12/21/2016 7:20:00 AM
So beautifully written... A 7...
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Darren White
Date: 12/21/2016 7:28:00 AM
Supraja, a 7? Thank you!
Date: 12/21/2016 6:02:00 AM
Very beautiful Darren and so true, the moon does wrap us in its arms and it costs nothing to feel this wonder. Nicely done my friend.
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Darren White
Date: 12/21/2016 6:04:00 AM
Thanks, my friend :)
Date: 12/21/2016 5:22:00 AM
- Beautifully written, Darren - Good luck in the contest - Best wishes for a peaceful and beautiful Christmas to you and your family :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Darren White
Date: 12/21/2016 5:48:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise, and the same wishes from me to you :)

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