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Moon Spoon

MOON SPOON

gossamer moon shine
boat rocks gentle back and forth
trees sway in the breeze

12/17/2016

moonsensualhaiku

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Afzal Nusker

December 28, 2016 at 7:00 AM

A Haiku, beautifully swaying in the moon shine. Congratulations!

Kim Rodrigues

December 28, 2016 at 7:24 AM

Thank you, Afzal!

Joanna Daniel

December 28, 2016 at 3:38 AM

Congrats on a lovely win, Kim:)

Kim Rodrigues

December 28, 2016 at 7:24 AM

Thank you, Jo!

Connie Marcum Wong

December 27, 2016 at 7:51 PM

A lovely vision to behold Kim! Congratulations on your wonderful win! ; ) 7

Kim Rodrigues

December 27, 2016 at 11:05 PM

Thank you, Connie!

Sandra Haight

December 27, 2016 at 6:59 PM

Lovely imagery, Kim. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra

Kim Rodrigues

December 27, 2016 at 11:05 PM

Thank you, Sandra! Hugs! :)

Andrea Dietrich

December 27, 2016 at 5:17 PM

beautiful, Kim. Congrats on the win

Kim Rodrigues

December 27, 2016 at 11:06 PM

Thank you, Andrea! xo

Doug Vinson

December 27, 2016 at 1:48 PM

Kim, such a beautiful overall image. To focus in on one line - "gossamer moon shine" - the 'M' sounds repeat, the N at the end of 'moon' sets us up for the one in "shine" just as the 'S" sound from gossamer is repeated. A perfect line, a perfect phrase, big part of what poetry is. : )

Kim Rodrigues

December 27, 2016 at 3:54 PM

Thanks so much, Doug!