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poem submitted to "Skeletons" poetry contest, Seth Pina, sponsor, July 27, 2026

MOON SKULL

I wake to the sound  
of my own ribs humming~  
a thin, metallic music  
as if someone plucked me  
like an instrument  
left behind in an abandoned room.  

The moon hovers at shoulder height,
caught in the curve of my skull  
like a thought I can’t shake loose.  
Its light pours through me,  
filling the hollow places  
with a glow that feels  
almost like memory.  

I walk, though the ground  
doesn’t behave.  
It moves like a living thing
rippling beneath my feet
soft as breath,  
then hardens suddenly  
as if deciding  
whether I deserve passage.  

A bird made of dust  
lands on my shoulder.  
It peers into my empty sockets  
and seems satisfied  
with what it finds.  
When it flies away,  
it leaves behind a feather  
that whispers  
every secret I’ve forgotten.  

Sometimes I pass mirrors  
that refuse to reflect me.  
They show forests,  
oceans,  
rooms I’ve never entered—  
as though they’re offering  
alternative histories  
I might inhabit  
if I weren’t made of bone.  

But I am.  
And bone remembers  
in its own strange way.  
It keeps the shape of laughter,  
the weight of sorrow,  
the echo of footsteps  
that once belonged to me.  

Tonight the stars gather  
inside my ribcage,  
settling there  
like travelers seeking shelter.  
They pulse softly,  
a constellation  
trying to teach me  
how to feel again.  

I sit with them,  
quiet,  
letting their light  
thread through my marrow.  
And for a moment—  
a brief, impossible moment—  
I am not a skeleton  
wandering the dream.  
I am the dream  
wandering me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 3:13 AM
This is a beautifully surreal and evocative piece of free verse. The imagery you've woven throughout the poem is simply stunning—from the auditory opening of the "thin, metallic music" of the ribs to the visual of the moon caught in the skull. The free verse form flows wonderfully, mirroring the shifting, unpredictable nature of the dreamscape you describe. I especially love the progression toward the end, where the emptiness of the bone is filled by a constellation of stars. The final lines, where the speaker realizes they are "the dream wandering me," provide an absolutely brilliant and haunting conclusion. Wonderful work! Well earned place in the contest.👏
Hind Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 12:57 AM
simply amazing !!
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