Moon Pond

she dives into the milky pond,
stars sing “hallelujah” on a lit dark night,
far away from the cadaver earth.

angel wings - dipped in white chocolate,
albino robes resound with hymn.
halo over head, like a golden wedding ring.

the bellows heave on sphere below
for a sweet soul heavenbound.
each tear — the genesis of a star.

compassionate angels filter the atmosphere 
with a pool net.  sorrowful sediment,
thus purified and blessed, for afterlife’s nest.

1/7/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Sands Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 9:21 AM
Wow very nice descriptions Kim. Well done :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 10:20 AM
Thanks, Heidi!
May Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 6:27 AM
A heavenly journey on a dark night...Nicely penned Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 6:30 AM
Thank you, Joseph!
Pandit Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 6:26 AM
This poem is awesome..an excellent depiction!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 6:30 AM
Thank you, Vijay!
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