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Moon Pond

she dives into the milky pond, stars sing “hallelujah” on a lit dark night, far away from the cadaver earth. angel wings - dipped in white chocolate, albino robes resound with hymn. halo over head, like a golden wedding ring. the bellows heave on sphere below for a sweet soul heavenbound. each tear — the genesis of a star. compassionate angels filter the atmosphere with a pool net. sorrowful sediment, thus purified and blessed, for afterlife’s nest. 1/7/2018

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Date: 2/8/2018 9:21:00 AM
Wow very nice descriptions Kim. Well done :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/8/2018 10:20:00 AM
Thanks, Heidi!
Date: 2/8/2018 6:27:00 AM
A heavenly journey on a dark night...Nicely penned Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/8/2018 6:30:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph!
Date: 2/8/2018 6:26:00 AM
This poem is awesome..an excellent depiction!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/8/2018 6:30:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay!

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