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Moon of Tides

By such silent power the moon invisibly renders Posed in its mansion in the sky it surrenders In the hours of silent light upon the coal dark night Invisibly shifting ocean tides to soft foamy white Posed in its mansion in the sky it surrenders Its force and terrestrial gravity that takes no slumber Invisibly shifting ocean tides to soft foamy white Amending the rhythm of winds on waves motion Its force and terrestrial gravity takes no slumber In the hours of silent light upon the coal dark night Amending rhythms of winds on waves motion By such silent power the moon invisibly renders January 29, 2021 Proud Pantoum Poetry Contest Sponsored by Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 2/1/2021 4:07:00 PM
Wonderful pantoum on the moon and how it effects the tides. So poetic.
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 2/5/2021 1:12:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. So appreciated.
Date: 1/29/2021 10:17:00 PM
Wow! What a beautiful write! We swoon in the light of the moon! Enjoyed! Good luck for the contest!
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 1/30/2021 10:44:00 AM
So appreciate your comment!! Glad to see you are a "Moon" fan!

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