Moon Moods

MOON MOODS

Over a sink full of dishes I stand
Fry pans, coffee cups, sudsy hands
When I notice an ominous moon
Angry face signals bad things coming soon.

Weary from  a day of dashed hopes
My mind turned to bubbles like soap
Then I threw down my wet, dirty sponge
And went out the back door with a lunge!

I climbed up my yard’s tallest tree
To the tippy top branch I could see
Then I whistled the 5-Star alarm
And swung from stars arm over arm.

Til at last I was before that old moon
Who looked at me like I was a goon
“Your face looks so troubled and mean,
“Foreshadowing the bad things you’ve seen.”

The moon took a breath, unfurrowed his brow
“Thank you, my sister, for stopping me now.
“I’ve been feeling lonely and just out of sorts,
“But you bring me cheer, and some stunning rapports.”

I turned for a minute to bask in his glow
When things all went screwy and more I don’t know
But I turned my head back and the dishes did beckon,
But the moon shown a happier and nicer reflection!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Aldana Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 4:32 PM
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Rodgers Avatar
January 5, 2024 at 5:43 PM
Happy New Year, Cindi, Your poem is a lovely and evocative piece that captures the essence of the moon’s power over our emotions. The vivid imagery and clever wordplay make it a joy to read. I especially love the line “I climbed up my yard’s tallest tree, To the tippy top branch I could see.” By the way thanks for introducing me to Poetry Soup! - Blessings Doup!
Rockwell Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 1:34 PM
Thanks! It was just a fun little poem, but I appreciate all your kind words! Thanks for joining the Soup! We need to all get together sometime! ~Cindi
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