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Moon Makes Heart Swoon

Clouds darkness a shroud, of which it was proud, till a gust of breeze, gave moonlight release. The moon shows her face, reflecting sun’s grace, transforming harsh light, in hues of soft white. We see the pale moon, bestowing love’s boon, as a healing balm, ushering deep calm. Moonlight heals our soul, bathed in love, now whole; melancholy shorn, we’re here now reborn. 17-July-2022 One In Five 2 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Joseph May Theme #4. “The pale moon emerged from dark clouds”
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Proxenos Avatar
August 1, 2022 at 8:23 AM
Hi Seeker, i love this poem, brilliant versing and a story so well told. Congrats on your win. HUGS AND BLESSINGS, Jennifer.
Seeker Avatar
August 1, 2022 at 8:58 AM
Thank you, Jennifer :)
May Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 3:06 AM
Congrats on your win Seeker, Nicely penned ...
Seeker Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 5:13 AM
Thanks for hosting, enjoyed participating:)
Dietrich Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 12:41 PM
bathed in love. Like Mystic, I really loved the lines at the end of this one too.
Seeker Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 7:52 PM
Shhh ~ a secret … moonlight white = spiritual light, our inner light, prismatically reflected in rainbow colours. That’s why our subconscious mind is attracted to the moon
Rose  Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 3:59 AM
Moonlight heals our souls, what a beautiful thought.
Seeker Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 4:43 AM
Thank you, Mystic Rose! Aren’t we all drawn to the beauteous moonlight?
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