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Clouds darkness a shroud, of which it was proud, till a gust of breeze, gave moonlight release. The moon shows her face, reflecting sun’s grace, transforming harsh light, in hues of soft white. We see the pale moon, bestowing love’s boon, as a healing balm, ushering deep calm. Moonlight heals our soul, bathed in love, now whole; melancholy shorn, we’re here now reborn. 17-July-2022 One In Five 2 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Joseph May Theme #4. “The pale moon emerged from dark clouds”

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Date: 8/1/2022 8:23:00 AM
Hi Seeker, i love this poem, brilliant versing and a story so well told. Congrats on your win. HUGS AND BLESSINGS, Jennifer.
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Date: 8/1/2022 8:58:00 AM
Thank you, Jennifer :)
Date: 7/30/2022 3:06:00 AM
Congrats on your win Seeker, Nicely penned ...
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Date: 7/30/2022 5:13:00 AM
Thanks for hosting, enjoyed participating:)
Date: 7/17/2022 12:41:00 PM
bathed in love. Like Mystic, I really loved the lines at the end of this one too.
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Date: 7/17/2022 7:52:00 PM
Shhh ~ a secret … moonlight white = spiritual light, our inner light, prismatically reflected in rainbow colours. That’s why our subconscious mind is attracted to the moon
Date: 7/17/2022 3:59:00 AM
Moonlight heals our souls, what a beautiful thought.
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Date: 7/17/2022 4:43:00 AM
Thank you, Mystic Rose! Aren’t we all drawn to the beauteous moonlight?

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