Matthew Horstkotter Poet Triolet

Moon Lit Sky of Stars

A moon lit sky of stars
Spanning far and wide
Preserved on the shelf in jars
A moon lit sky of stars
Sleeping amongst the sand bars
Listing to the rolling tide
A moon lit sky of stars
Spanning far and wide

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Robert Pettit May 7, 2013 at 11:52 PM So this was your first one? Good easy to read and understand writing. Reminds me of a night at the Jersey Shore.

Patrycjusz Kopec May 7, 2013 at 7:12 AM I like your idea of moon light sky of stars listening to rolling tide

Poet Destroyer A April 23, 2013 at 9:14 PM About your poem: i love the open attention in the sky. A very dreamy image..xox...PD,

Poet Destroyer A April 23, 2013 at 9:12 PM Hello Matthew, thank you for the nice comments. stopping by to read the first poem you posted on the soup. :-) A late warm welcome to the soup.... xox~ Linda

Victoria Anderson-Throop April 9, 2013 at 4:56 PM Sets a lovely backdrop... Listing to the rolling tide..nice line...I think that sometimes short is best, and you do it very well here.....

Anna Lo October 16, 2012 at 3:03 AM ..short but went well..continue doing good literary pieces..

Jon A Cavanaugh September 22, 2012 at 11:35 AM well done. Excellent lines for your triolet