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"moon Lit Dance"

Our slow dance under the stars and moon... The music in the background plays our tune... The sand on the beach is our dance floor... Your hips move slow and have me wanting more... The glow of the sky is our crystal ball... And this secluded ocean front is our dance hall... We blend into one as the song plays on... A waltz across this stage to a sand dune where we bond... The grooves are slow the motion seductive... This dance of love is a gift that we both live... for "Dance" contest

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/15/2010 8:59:00 PM

Congrats Michael on your HM in Paula's Dance contest.. she still cannot finalize her contest but has posted a blog with the winning poem titles and I am looking each one up individually to congratulate ..so enjoy your special honor luv.. J.G. always.. and forever..

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/13/2010 10:57:00 PM

How romantic :) enjoyed this "moon lit dance" Michael :) I sure do wish you the best in the contest-- nikko :)

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 9/7/2010 5:11:00 AM

very nice write good luck in the contest well done faleshia

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/6/2010 6:26:00 PM

this poem you write is also a gift for the reader Michael, Harry

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/6/2010 4:06:00 PM

I hope your dance of love lasts forever, Michael. Great entry for the contest -- you allow the reader to see every move you make on the dance floor. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/6/2010 1:05:00 PM

Well this is definitely romantic and sexy in the same breath..a sure winner for the contest my White Knight... enjoyed the slow seductive dancing... on the beach no less.. this Jersey Girl is already there luv.. good luck..

Deb Wilson

Date: 9/6/2010 6:42:00 AM

Sexy dancing for sure! love it..good luck in the contest..Take care~Deb

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/6/2010 6:41:00 AM

This is a beautiful scene you painted with your words Michael.. Let me know when this scene plays out again lol.. Best wishes for the contest with this beauty.. love Wilma