Moon In Foggy Mist

The moon has risen Slightly into the night air Reflections are cast On the river down below A foggy mist lies opaque
Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kendrick Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 9:31 AM
Enjoyed reading your creative work..Very expressive and descriptive of an evening scene..I can almost see it from the description..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by...Sara
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December 7, 2012 at 5:15 AM
a magnificent view with incredible words depicting the Moon with dynamic imagery ..luv the last line as it ends the poem nicely with a flare of suspense .. another masterful work of poetic art Russell luv .. romantic in a sense too my friend ..
Dietrich Avatar
December 6, 2012 at 9:28 PM
Nice picture painted, my friend!! Good luck if it is for Susan's contest. I sure love those tanka contests!!
West Avatar
December 6, 2012 at 8:11 PM
Hi Russell, what a great Tanka, and such imagery. Rollo
Guzzi Avatar
December 6, 2012 at 6:40 PM
oopsie ;) NICE one Russ!!!lIGHT & lOVE
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