Moon In Auburn

Moon In Auburn


As the stars were heaped upon a mantles Shangri-La
The miniature toy town beneath its cape 
Quiet hung in yellow golden windows lit
So silent in the dales and woods blanket
The dog fox cry echoed from the moon
Crisp and cloudless chill less coldness
With the twin of the moon fluxed silver blue
In the tiny handmaidens mirror of reflection
Natures dark slept beneath the shadows of her hand

And she crept in dreams
Within the tip toe of cats
Rendered the night through amber eyes
Glistening on the turns of lovers kisses
For all the endless that she misses
Arched above an eternal sky
She is drawn to the moss of rocks
And clings in branches hung with lichen
To the feathered damp of leaves
Which catch her spark

Just a whisper footfalls breezes shifter
In the country lanes of ancient mazes
By stone wall and rabbits foot
Close upon the dandelions head
With all the disguised colours leaping on unseen acoustics
Were hidden amongst rivulet beds
Catching the silver blue
The dog fox cry echoed from the moon
And swung out the flax upon the stars

Fingers traced their destiny within those pinpoint suns
A pattern constellation traits of has; she was born
The atonement of steady reckoning he had
Cut in trough on the ploughed earth
Where all the seeds of tomorrow had been scattered
With all their promises of a seasons ripening 
Old songs sung of proud man “John Barleycorn”
And the distillation of his bone and marrow

And while the stars piled high on their Shangri-La
Recounted the lost tales of lovers in forgotten times
All the memories fell in auburn locks
And swept upon the Luna light shores
The twin she fluxed in silver blue
And the dog fox cry echoed from the moon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 6/4/2009 8:39:00 PM
Again and again ... your back to the awesome mode of awesome writes ... this one is exploding with power.
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Date: 6/4/2009 11:11:00 AM
Enchanting. Gorgeous. Amazing. And Many More Adjectives. Great Job. Jese
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Date: 6/4/2009 8:20:00 AM
Hi Colin, I'm sick, actually with fever. Sitting here spaced out wondering why I can't just go to bed. Addicted I guess, but dont have the strength to comment. How are you doing??? Sweet to ask me. Take care of you. xoxo
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Date: 6/1/2009 3:08:00 PM
Beyond enchanting. Otherworldly beautiful. Imagination, love and skill of words, a powerful combination. You, my dear, are bewitched. Thanks col for your thoughtful congrats. So much appreciated. Hugs, Shar
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