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Moon Glowing

moon glowing in sky talking with stars tonight Written 5-31-11

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Date: 6/5/2011 8:07:00 PM
a great poem for the hundred hots James,,, different haiku.. but awesome,,, thanks for sharing,..p.d.
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James Foulk
Date: 6/5/2011 8:23:00 PM
thank you for reading and commenting on this poem.
Date: 6/4/2011 8:03:00 AM
Wonderful imagery...liked it.
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Date: 6/3/2011 7:09:00 AM
* “Beautiful Vision * My Dear Precious James. * As If Living Within Another Dimension * Cloaked Within The Vesture's of Eternity * Going Where Few Humans May Have Ever Gone Before * Smile * Sincerely Yours * Sarah” *
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Date: 6/2/2011 7:02:00 AM
Morning James--- The moon was NOT invited to participate in the other's conversation. I would rename this one to--Moon is Eavesdropping. lol. Seriously, this is lovely and I can imagine the whole group at a dinner table and the moon functioning as the candlelight! Enjoyed much, friend! NIce powerful haiku. Gwendolen
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Date: 6/1/2011 6:52:00 PM
I certainly would like to listen in on that conversation, James. I enjoyed your Haiku
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Date: 6/1/2011 4:13:00 PM
a lovely vision for everyone but I envision loveers underneath this moon glowing James.. perfect luv..
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James Foulk
Date: 6/2/2011 10:57:00 AM
thank you Linda for reading and commenting on this poem.
Date: 6/1/2011 12:42:00 AM
excellent haiku james Luv*Skat
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Date: 5/31/2011 9:39:00 PM
I really enjoyed reading this James-- love how you made it cozy, with the stars and sky talking --never thought of it that way, thanks for the new perspective :)
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Date: 5/31/2011 5:05:00 PM
hard form to tackle, 1st thing to learn no punctuation, capitalization [never a period for its meant to be open ended, so a friend or love can write one before it or after] 5/7/5 is not important any more so that's good! ;), also no metaphor, personification simile, rhyme etc [alliteration is sometimes used] must have a cut, making the verse have 2parts. Hope this helps Light & Love
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James Foulk
Date: 5/31/2011 5:20:00 PM
gee, i just wanted a comment not a English lesson, i just write them, sometimes they are correct, sometimes not. i know about the vowlels thing, but thank you anyway, i will remember next time not to put a form in.