Moon Glow Love

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My eyes rose to the moon tonight with thoughts of you when we first met; remembered how we tried to feel bound close- though ridge between us set. Extensive miles tween us, for sure- when you enlisted in the Corps; but every night our eyes would touch- while moon glow formed its open door. This kept our closeness filled with love since we, as two, would feel like one. Combing eyes and bonded thoughts- extending, blending, it was spun. Oh, yes- the moon, our concourse formed, where we could meet, keep lit our glow, until once more you could come home- our moon stoked fires for us below. August 29, 2020 Contest: The Night Sky Poetry Contest Sponsor: Anna Marie Kaianah Lipogram: No Letter "A" In Wording

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Anna Marie Kaianah

Date: 5/1/2022 12:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Sandra! Thank you for entering my contest. <3 ~Anna Kaianah

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 9/17/2020 5:08:00 AM

This is very beautiful and emotional, Sandra, and I truly enjoyed this poem about my favorite muse, (moon) ... I hope you are happy and healthy, and I pray I did not do something in the past to offend you in any way. Blessings to you and yours always. <3

Sandra Haight
Date: 9/17/2020 11:09:00 AM

Thank you so much, Greg, for your lovely, uplifting comments on my 'moon' poem. Due to other time-constraining obligations right now, my interaction with PS resulted in limited time only for writing and posting to stay creative (inspired by contests), and I have had to set aside reading and commenting for now. I am okay and appreciate your concern- and all is good- no worries! Blessings to you too. Sandra <3

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/16/2020 11:36:00 PM

Romantic and full of hopeful promise, congratulations on your lovely win, Sandra:)

Rico Leffanta

Date: 8/29/2020 12:31:00 PM

Well done! Graphic video, too! Aloha! Rico

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 8/29/2020 10:32:00 AM

Wow such a romantic imaginative poem with the moon stoking fires and moon glow ahhh so beautiful I'm floored, who wouldn't be!! Awesome rhyming and content as you write of your soldier love. Kudos! Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.