2025 Poetry Marathon Mile 25 Poetry Contest Sponsor, Mark Toney Entered, October 28, 2025 ~ 8th Place
Entered, July 8, 2026, In The Contest "Moon" Sponsor, Seth Pina
The poem is also a Lithogram ~ written without using the letter A
My eyes rose to the Moon tonight with thoughts of you when we first met; remembered how we tried to feel bound close, though a ridge between us set. Extensive miles 'tween us, for sure- when you enlisted in the Corps, but every night, our eyes would touch- while Moon glow formed its open door. This kept our closeness filled with love since we, as two, would feel like one. Combining eyes and bonded thoughts- extending, blending, it was spun. Oh, yes, the Moon, our concourse formed, where we could meet, keep lit our glow, until once more you could come home- our Moon stoked fires for us below.
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