James Marshall Goff Poet Choka

Moon Glow

Tears lost and alive
Finding hope with golden moon
Regrets I’ve left holding close
Tremble in my angst
Rising once more with your smile
Shimmering in your full moon


James Marshall Goff
What happens during a full moon contest
10/30/11

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Anonomus Scorpio January 1, 2023 at 6:25 PM " Regrets I've left holding close" " Rising once more with your smile" This melts me right to my core ! Very nice! James Marshall Goff January 5, 2023 at 6:23 AM Thanks AS!

Poet Destroyer A November 4, 2011 at 11:25 PM Dear, James... i sure like the idea of what happens period.. Good poem.. love the rising line,..p.d.

Sarah Seraphin November 4, 2011 at 9:35 PM * “I Love This Soulfelt Verse * My Dear Precious & Gifted James * Tis Part of This Moment In Time to Have Regrets * One Day I Hope That I Shall Stand With * As Gazing Upon That Glorious & Wonderful Moon * Luv Always * Sarah.” *

Elizabeth Wesley November 4, 2011 at 9:12 PM Can't imagine a sky without a moon. Can't imagine a poet without a moon to write about. Yours is so lovely with the image and emotion too.

Dr.Ram Mehta November 3, 2011 at 3:46 AM Congratulations on the win with this lovely write, Jimbo

Andrea Dietrich November 2, 2011 at 9:26 PM and congratulations.

Andrea Dietrich November 2, 2011 at 9:25 PM wow, this is so deserving of a second place. Maybe even first (I haven't read that one yet) Anyway, this one goes to faves!

Carolyn Devonshire November 2, 2011 at 12:10 PM So happy to see you win with this poem, Jimbo. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn (and I know the other poem came from your own inspiration)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 2, 2011 at 9:48 AM Congrats James on second place win with this visual delight for the contest luv.. enjoyed..

Carol Sunshine Brown November 2, 2011 at 5:45 AM Congratulations on your win in Russell's "What Happens During A Full Moon" contest Jimbo. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta November 2, 2011 at 1:03 AM Congratulations on the win with this lovely poem, Jimbo

Carolyn Devonshire November 1, 2011 at 12:32 PM There really is something about the moon that helps us put things in perspective. It always makes me remember I'm but a speck in the universe. Better to be a happy speck! Great entry for Russell's contest, Jimbo. Best wishes for success. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick November 1, 2011 at 8:34 AM Good luck in the contest...Reads like a winner to me..I especially like the last line..Sara