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Divine book expresses moon’s great wonders soothing to soul that serenely ponders while viewing beauty walking in brightness* exuding sweet Eve’s female gentleness. With attributes to ladies alluded changing moon’s gracefulness is applauded of varied shapes, colors, sizes’ presence showing Supreme Artist’s magnificence. Midst “… she that looketh forth as the morning, fair as the moon,”** in Scriptures truth’s reigning my heart thanks the Lord for His grant of light saluting women fulfilling roles right. Beholding the moon wrought by hands divine luminous due to Creator’s design radiating to smite night’s obscurity I see Mom’s face, smiling with love-purity. Joyously basking at the moon’s glory I’m delighted in Mother’s victory praising God for life-building pursuits’ flow with Dad --- home’s sun, making us stars, to glow.
*Job 31:26 If I beheld the sun when it shined, or the moon walking in brightness. **Song of Solomon 6:10 Who is she that looketh forth as the morning, fair as the moon…? August 10, 2021 10th place, "Is The Moon Male or Female or Both" Poetry Premier Contest Sponsored by Chantelle Anne Cooke; judged on 8/10/2021.

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Date: 8/11/2021 10:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. I love how you always add bible verses. Have a blessed day with this win...........
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Date: 8/10/2021 10:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your contest win, Beata. You deserve it with this wonderfully written poem.
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Date: 8/10/2021 10:28:00 AM
Great Work. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/10/2021 1:31:00 AM
This is excellent, Beata, loved the way you incorporated the Bible verses showcasing that the moon is female:)
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