Caren Krutsinger Poet Blank verse

Moon Defers To Sun

Moon defers to sun, stars fade into oblivion
Diamond dew glistens in the perky green grass
Sense spirit blessing the yard, completing bliss
Coffee on the veranda, a bit of a chocolate chip cookie

Life is twinkling, waking up, sharing a chilly morning
March is on the march, no pun intended.
Faerie titters heard faintly amid the daffodils.
A cardinal swoops down to get a cookie crumb.



Written 3-23-2019
Contest:  Late March 2019
Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Eve Roper March 26, 2019 at 9:15 PM Caren, great write, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`* Caren Krutsinger March 27, 2019 at 4:04 AM Thank you Eve. I appreciate your stopping by, my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu March 25, 2019 at 6:30 PM Hello Caren, you have painted a lovely picture with your words. Enjoyed this poem. Have a nice evening my friend. Caren Krutsinger March 25, 2019 at 9:39 PM Thank you Darlene. I hope you have a wonderful week, and I hope the sun is shining for you!

M. L. Kiser March 23, 2019 at 10:03 PM What a lovely nature, word-painting. Ahhhhh...thanks. Caren Krutsinger March 24, 2019 at 5:55 AM Thank you M.L. We have cardinals that swoop onto the porch to get a chunk of cat food. Some do not get to swoop back out.

Line Gauthier March 23, 2019 at 7:18 PM Lovely poem, Caren. Caren Krutsinger March 23, 2019 at 7:39 PM Thank you Line.

Mystic Rose Rose March 23, 2019 at 11:04 AM March is on the march, I love it. Great play on words Caren, I'm longing to go bird watching , soon. Maybe I'll catch a view of your cardinal from here. Have a pleasant day dear poet. love xo Caren Krutsinger March 23, 2019 at 11:25 AM I love my March and April, two favorite all-time months for me, Pixie Dust!