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Moon Defers To Sun

Moon defers to sun, stars fade into oblivion
Diamond dew glistens in the perky green grass
Sense spirit blessing the yard, completing bliss
Coffee on the veranda, a bit of a chocolate chip cookie

Life is twinkling, waking up, sharing a chilly morning
March is on the march, no pun intended.
Faerie titters heard faintly amid the daffodils.
A cardinal swoops down to get a cookie crumb.



Written 3-23-2019
Contest:  Late March 2019
Sponsor: Brian Strand

Copyright © Caren Krutsinger | Year Posted 2019

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Eve Roper Date: 3/26/2019 9:15:00 PM Caren, great write, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply Caren Krutsinger Date: 3/27/2019 4:04:00 AM Thank you Eve. I appreciate your stopping by, my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 3/25/2019 6:30:00 PM Hello Caren, you have painted a lovely picture with your words. Enjoyed this poem. Have a nice evening my friend. Login to Reply Caren Krutsinger Date: 3/25/2019 9:39:00 PM Thank you Darlene. I hope you have a wonderful week, and I hope the sun is shining for you!

M. L. Kiser Date: 3/23/2019 10:03:00 PM What a lovely nature, word-painting. Ahhhhh...thanks. Login to Reply Caren Krutsinger Date: 3/24/2019 5:55:00 AM Thank you M.L. We have cardinals that swoop onto the porch to get a chunk of cat food. Some do not get to swoop back out.

Line Gauthier Date: 3/23/2019 7:18:00 PM Lovely poem, Caren. Login to Reply Caren Krutsinger Date: 3/23/2019 7:39:00 PM Thank you Line.

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 3/23/2019 11:04:00 AM March is on the march, I love it. Great play on words Caren, I'm longing to go bird watching , soon. Maybe I'll catch a view of your cardinal from here. Have a pleasant day dear poet. love xo Login to Reply Caren Krutsinger Date: 3/23/2019 11:25:00 AM I love my March and April, two favorite all-time months for me, Pixie Dust!