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Moon Defers To Sun

Moon defers to sun, stars fade into oblivion Diamond dew glistens in the perky green grass Sense spirit blessing the yard, completing bliss Coffee on the veranda, a bit of a chocolate chip cookie Life is twinkling, waking up, sharing a chilly morning March is on the march, no pun intended. Faerie titters heard faintly amid the daffodils. A cardinal swoops down to get a cookie crumb. Written 3-23-2019 Contest: Late March 2019 Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Eve Roper

Date: 3/26/2019 9:15:00 PM

Caren, great write, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/27/2019 4:04:00 AM

Thank you Eve. I appreciate your stopping by, my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/25/2019 6:30:00 PM

Hello Caren, you have painted a lovely picture with your words. Enjoyed this poem. Have a nice evening my friend.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/25/2019 9:39:00 PM

Thank you Darlene. I hope you have a wonderful week, and I hope the sun is shining for you!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/23/2019 10:03:00 PM

What a lovely nature, word-painting. Ahhhhh...thanks.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/24/2019 5:55:00 AM

Thank you M.L. We have cardinals that swoop onto the porch to get a chunk of cat food. Some do not get to swoop back out.

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/23/2019 7:18:00 PM

Lovely poem, Caren.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/23/2019 7:39:00 PM

Thank you Line.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/23/2019 11:04:00 AM

March is on the march, I love it. Great play on words Caren, I'm longing to go bird watching , soon. Maybe I'll catch a view of your cardinal from here. Have a pleasant day dear poet. love xo

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/23/2019 11:25:00 AM

I love my March and April, two favorite all-time months for me, Pixie Dust!