Harry Horsman Poet Dizain

Moon Dance

Once upon a time so brightly
I had this compulsion to dance
Just holding you oh so tightly;
In thoughts of romantic perchance
Realistic dreams of nuance.
Your silver beam of love the lure
Bathed in splendour ever so pure
In breath upon the breeze clement;
Held here within your light the cure
I thank the lord for this moment.

 © Harry J Horsman 2012

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Andrea Dietrich April 18, 2020 at 12:40 PM oh yes, that most beautiful memory engrained forever on the mind, something I write of so often myself. I see that since I last visited this one, you won a contest with it. Back in 2016, so a very belated congrats for that, Harry.

Poet Destroyer A January 26, 2016 at 9:37 PM Harry, Congrats on your Moonish win. Luv LINDA -

Connie Marcum Wong January 14, 2016 at 1:08 PM This poem is very beautiful Harry. I see why it is a top winner. Congratulations my friend!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 14, 2016 at 4:10 AM Congrats on awesome win with this wonderful write harry!

Skat A January 13, 2016 at 10:37 PM Harry, Congrats on your win............ Luv ** SKAT**

Andrea Dietrich January 10, 2016 at 7:03 PM I just let my finger fall on a place in your oldies page 5, my lucky number and fell on this splendid poem, it is one of my favorites of yours I think. I just love it.

Stacey Behal January 27, 2013 at 1:39 PM Thanks for sharing. This is a well thought out poem- The wording pulled me into thought. Thanks. LEGANDWRITER

Poet Destroyer A March 20, 2012 at 11:10 PM Harry, congrats once again on your win... i want to thank you for your nice comment..always..pd

Carol Sunshine Brown March 19, 2012 at 11:23 AM Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Let's Dance" contest Harry. Love, Carol

Charlotte Puddifoot March 18, 2012 at 3:29 PM congrats on your win in the contest; I'm happy to re-read this one on the winners' list :-)

M.I.A . March 18, 2012 at 1:40 AM Realistic dreams of nuance... wow! now you make me want to dance with you! beautiful piece Harry, good luck on the contest M.I.A . March 18, 2012 at 1:43 AM no need for luck, Congrats is in the order! wonderful :)

Andrea Dietrich March 17, 2012 at 5:18 PM Well, it's on the list at least. Congratulations, Harry. A special poem!!

Nette Onclaud March 17, 2012 at 2:59 PM breathtakingly soulful, harry… congrats on your win in my contest :) huggs

Joyce Johnson March 17, 2012 at 12:43 PM Very nice Harry. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 17, 2012 at 11:58 AM congrats Harry luv on a super win for this wonderful moon dance .. very expressive lines of superb imagery flows.. happy weekend...

Joann Grisetti March 17, 2012 at 8:36 AM congratulations in the contest with a beautiful dance.

Marty Owens March 16, 2012 at 12:50 PM Very nice and romantic Harry...enjoyed...good luck in the contest...thanks for the nice comments...Marty

Gautami Phookan March 16, 2012 at 9:45 AM Oh, such a sweet-romantic piece on "dance". like how you put the word 'clement' there, Good luck Harry, huggs

Andrea Dietrich March 15, 2012 at 9:12 PM awesome, it' s a fave of Charma too!!

Charmaine Chircop March 15, 2012 at 9:49 AM This poem has the romantic WoW Factor-Just beautiful and going tmf.. the poet too:)-cHARMA

Joyce Johnson March 15, 2012 at 9:42 AM A lovely, romantic entry. Good luck Harry. Thank you for your kind comments on my poetry. Love, Joyce

Tracy Edwards March 15, 2012 at 6:20 AM You can tell lots of thoughts of romance went into your write Harry..Its just lovely xxx Hugs

Andrea Dietrich March 14, 2012 at 8:56 PM ooh la la. I LOVE this, Harry. Love that word "clement" you come up with such great vocabulary even in a little fun poem like this one.!! YOu know what. Maybe this even works for the "lure" contest!! A FAVE

Doris Culverhouse March 14, 2012 at 6:20 PM enjoyed reading your work!! Thanks for reading my nonsense....;)

Charlotte Puddifoot March 14, 2012 at 5:23 PM hey harry, I think this is a delightful entry for the dancing contest, romantic and lovely...thank you for your sweet words on 'finish this verse', I wasn't sure about it so it's encouraging to get some positive feedback! :-)

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