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Moon Bloomed

After noon, bloomed the moon, Like my grandma' s curved comb; I listened to lullabies, and stories, Amidst stars - not alone. Came a prince with a princess, Mounting a horse with a sword And bloomed the moon after noon, Like my grandma's silver spoon. I saw the prince with the princess Again, they came - along the road, With the moon after noon, Like my grandma's round moon. Came the prince and the princess, With the sword, without the horse; Oh, where' s the moon after noon? It had gone... stars felt alone. *Honorable Mention* in the following contest (judged on Oct.18, 2020) Sept. 11, 2020 COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE(28) any theme any form Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand *A 3rd Place*in the following contest (judged on Sept. 16, 2020) Sept. 11, 2020 All In A Day Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor: William Kekaula

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Date: 2/11/2021 1:42:00 PM
A pleasure to find your delightful poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology, Malisha~
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Date: 10/19/2020 10:45:00 AM
Congratulation on your win
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Date: 10/18/2020 9:04:00 PM
Congratulations, Malisha, on your Great HM win in Brian's contest, which is a tough one in Poetry Soup.
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Date: 9/17/2020 7:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your 3rd Place in this contest, Malisha!! This is a great write!!
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Malisha Hansani
Date: 10/11/2020 5:08:00 PM
Thank you, Newton Arach, for the comment!
Date: 9/17/2020 5:30:00 AM
- Congratulations on your 3rd place in the contest, Malisha :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Malisha Hansani
Date: 10/11/2020 5:07:00 PM
Thank you, Sunsine Smile, for the comment!!
Date: 9/16/2020 9:47:00 PM
Metaphors of one then two souls midst nature, Malisha, stylishly done, congrats on your honorable win, Aloha! William
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Malisha Hansani
Date: 10/11/2020 5:07:00 PM
Thank you for the comment placement!!

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