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Moon Beams

I watch moonbeams dance Across the midnight skies Your brown eyes are like Quicksilver to me. Your voice is like echoes Piercing through my soul On the wind floating by I cannot contain myself When I see you coming. I see it there in your eyes You will always love me You will always be there As long as I need you As you lay me down to To make sweet love to me You take me places no one Else ever could.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/21/2017 5:54:00 PM
Sounds good. It is something pleasant to think about. You are expressive and unburdened by any shame. I think that is a good thing.
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Date: 6/2/2014 5:37:00 AM
Enjoyed the write. congrats on your poem being featured this week,
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Date: 8/9/2012 10:37:00 PM
So open to pure delight -so generous with your praise to love - Deity bless you Debbie - J.A.B. %
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 8/9/2012 11:41:00 PM
Thank you Justin ;}
Date: 1/5/2011 11:51:00 AM
So yielding, so beautiful, so gentle the feelings of this write.
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 8/9/2012 11:41:00 PM
Thank you David ;}
Date: 1/3/2011 4:08:00 AM
What a way to start out my New Year reading such exceptional poetry. Thank you for starting the new year out with us sharing your wonderful poetry Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/2/2011 5:37:00 AM
Beautiful scene and images you paint here my dear...always Michael
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