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Moon Ascent

@alons, ce sera pour la derniere fois@ Sophie Blanchard 1819 a metaphor of the sea sings no music, no swell here, to swing the stern; nor any pressure to float a kite: there is no 'flight' to the moon, no wing can carry me. At the birth of Napoleon's son I lifted from the Champ de Mars, and from the basket scattered a shower of papers to proclaim the birth. clearing steeple and tree top, opening a passage into airless geometry where faith is translated to trajectory, buoyancy, computation; weight against lift; gravity versus the pull of elsewhere. tilt of a wickerwork floor, creak of a cable; the flake of my dry lips at travel's very limit: so vast the distance that if I raised a finger behind it would vanish the whole blue jewel of the Earth: fireflies on an evening porch; a curtain sailing at a summer window; my mother bending to her linens, the remembrance of a smile creased in her skin. I am on the edge of the sky; I feel excellent, my eyes filed with moonclouds, and the dark seas. I am beginning to move away. Sophie Blanchard, Aeronaut (1778 - 1819)

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Date: 5/21/2018 8:07:00 AM
Very well penned, Yazmin, my Dearheart. Very eloquently worded. Welcome to Soup.
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Date: 5/18/2018 6:10:00 PM
The beauty of your poem takes my breath away, Yasmin. It's like you were channeling the mystical energy of Sophie Blanchard. The exhilaration of her experience is felt in your words and the enchantment of your imagery is enthralling and exquisite. Warmest wishes ~Susan
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Date: 5/18/2018 12:53:00 PM
I noticed your or a new poet to Soup. I would like to welcome you, Yazmin, I love the well painted scene you have created. Thank you for reading " Death Doesn't Mourn ".. hugs Eve ~`* .
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Date: 5/18/2018 7:44:00 AM
"Aeronaut of the Official Festivals" how wonderful for her to have been a balloonist in those times, what a dynamic woman for her day. Yazmin you have crafted a beautiful descriptive poem of her wonderful times in the sky. The exhilaration, seems like you felt it. Well written and a fave.....Maria xxx
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Date: 5/18/2018 7:32:00 AM
Enjoyed the journey through your poem Yazmin..you chose a buoyant theme..quite a lift this is..well done!
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Date: 5/18/2018 7:09:00 AM
Interesting story Yazmin and lovely images sewn against time. Now I must research Sophie Blanchard. Awesome.
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