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Tommy Anonymous

Poet Free verse

Moon and the Twilight

As I look up
The strong light from the moon
is blocked by the twilight
underneath

As I look inside
The unexplainable wants out
But is blocked by the fear
underneath

Copyright © Tommy Anonymous | Year Posted 2009

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Anne-Lise Andresen

December 6, 2011 at 10:26 AM

Tommy Flott dikt "Moon and the twilight" Heia norge Anne-Lise

November 15, 2009 at 4:39 AM

Very thoughtful write. Welcome to soup. Keep the pen flowing. Sara

Inkstain Thepoet

November 7, 2009 at 12:52 AM

I really liked this poem. It may be short but these words say a lot. Keep up the good work and welcome to the soup.

Charmaine Chircop

November 4, 2009 at 3:37 PM

Welcome to the soup,you re gonna enjoy it here, love the metaphors shadowing emotions..excellent--Charma

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 4, 2009 at 11:49 AM

I enjoyed reading your awesome poetry this afternoon Tommy. Wishing you a week filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol

November 4, 2009 at 8:22 AM

Poised poem. All the best.

November 4, 2009 at 7:54 AM

Excllent metaphoric comparison, Tommy! Welcome to Soup, Sincerely, Moses

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