Moon and Sun

Moon and Sun conversed one day debating which
one lead the way to happiness for those who gaze
at sun and moon so far away-
Sun claimed warmth and sunbeams bright-
moon claimed romance thru the night-
Sun said flowers lean toward me-
moon said my light leads the way-
moon said I can change my look-
crescent, full and in-between-
sun came back with this to say-
my warmth makes for a lovely day-
sun and moon finally agreed to become one
and eclipsed that day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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June 3, 2015 at 11:23 PM
This is one of the best poems I've read in all of today. Love the topic and imagery
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June 12, 2015 at 8:33 PM
you seem to be the only poet who comments about my poetry. thank you, you are very kind.
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