Probir Gupta Poet Tanka

Moon and Blooms

As a rule the room
Is full of ennui and ash
Except when your moon
Peeks behind bits and pieces
Fireflies in moment’s clichés

Moments normally
Insipid tea in old cups
Except when your look
Blooms all over the shadow
Waiting in acute hot sun
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7/9/16

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Andrea Dietrich September 10, 2016 at 10:15 AM awesome imagery around the moon, Probir. Lovely and romantic. Probir Gupta September 10, 2016 at 7:52 PM Thank you, Andrea ...

CayCay Godwin September 8, 2016 at 12:17 PM I have to say this - WOW ... CayCay Probir Gupta September 9, 2016 at 12:39 AM Thank you ...

Marion Mwangi September 8, 2016 at 7:17 AM there is that someone special who always lights up our lives. lovely poem Probir Gupta September 8, 2016 at 7:19 AM Thank you ...

Connie Marcum Wong September 7, 2016 at 12:07 PM These are lovely and romantic Probir. I love how you let the moon set the mood. ; ) 7 Probir Gupta September 7, 2016 at 7:50 PM Thank you ...

Daniel Turner September 7, 2016 at 10:00 AM Very nice, Probir. I love this one. In my humble opinion, I think it takes a great deal of talent to express thoughts in very few lines. Most people take so long to express themselves. You have done it very well with this write:) Probir Gupta September 7, 2016 at 7:52 PM Thank you ...