Moon

Mysterious orb of silvery light please shine down on me tonight. Fill me with your wondrous light whisper to me your secrets this night. Do not seek the cover of clouds I need your light with all its shrouds. Paint the world with glorious light rays and light up all the deeply hidden bays. Moon, oh dear moon blessed you be always light up the right way for me.

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/23/2014 7:21:00 PM

beautiful shining pen dear friend passing you a smile

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/23/2014 4:02:00 PM

Shadow, I had to check out your "Moon" write here. I like your couplet here very much. Your poem is both simple and direct but quite powerful with the imagery you've used. Excellent Work!! and a "7" from me. Cheers, Gary

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/23/2014 4:55:00 PM

ty Gary much appreciated I have several moon writes on here I simply love the moon in all her phrases hugs

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/22/2014 11:16:00 PM

Ah, the moon, my muse! How often have I written about the moon and it's glorious qualities! You poem here is truly wondrous my friend! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem here this evening! I love this awesome piece Shadow! What a dynamic write! Great Work! I have missed all of you in my absence! I will be around for the net few days as I await my next class...I will be leaving some brilliant Halloween poetry for everyone to read! Great Work!!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/23/2014 3:00:00 AM

Russell dear Russell so good to see you Soup has been a far bleaker place without you. I have missed you my friend. ty for your kind words if you like this try my Moon Ode that is one of my best on this evocative subject big hugs