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Moon

Oh moon!
in night you stroll
amidst stars,
a silhouette a day,
why?
Oh moon! 
to eulogize, an exemplar!
in night, a guide!
albeit this honour,
 a form a day!
why?
night, if you’ve gone astray,
no joy for us,
oh moon! 
form, beside the point, 
come unfailingly,
to entertain us!
come lastingly.

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Shadow Hamilton July 21, 2013 at 3:06 AM congrats on a fine win Shadow x smiles

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl July 20, 2013 at 12:18 AM Nice one Jenish , congratulations xx

Skat A July 19, 2013 at 8:59 PM Jenish, . CONGRATS <3 SKAT

Poet Destroyer A July 19, 2013 at 8:17 PM WOW, thank you for this one... Jenish,... CONGRATULATIONS.... :-) :-) :-) LINDA

Andrea Dietrich July 17, 2013 at 2:45 PM thanks so much for your many comments to my recent poem. Was about to comment to your top poem but then realized it was in my contest and I dont' want to see who has written the poems until I judge!! Let me see if I can find some new poem of yours to respond to.

Poet Destroyer A July 17, 2013 at 9:26 AM natures beauty does it well glistening through the night, such a lovely write, enjoyed ~always , Linda

Suzanne Delaney July 16, 2013 at 11:50 PM This is lovely....the images are wonderful. SuZ

Andrea Dietrich July 16, 2013 at 4:55 PM this is a lot of fun to read. Love the style you use!!

Kim Van Breda July 16, 2013 at 1:03 PM The Moon.. such a muse for us poets to write on.. mystical and insightful poem-- wonderful.

Skat A July 13, 2013 at 7:09 PM hi Jenish, a comfortable sight when it comes to the moon. love the dedication in your heart. luv*Skat