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Moon

I played marbles with the moon Taking it in my hand It was mine to command Feeling the cratered surface as I squeezed It left my hand with such ease In space there is no breeze Rolling through space My heart began to race As my breath kept pace Gravity pulling on the oceans below As the moons forces began to grow Space bending with an eerie glow The earth followed like a tethered ball Beckoning to the loving Moon's call Save me she said I do not want to burn Silly humans will they never learn At that moment I felt concern Passing all the planets one by one Heading with force towards the sun Lives may be lost for all time Because of a silly game of mine So I remain in a moonless space Left to ponder my disgrace I caught the Earth just in time Luckily the people are mostly fine The earth is sad it sheds salted tears The love of his life is no longer here A cosmic game resulted in great cost Look heavenward to see what was lost From here to the moon and back contest Written April 21, 2013

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Date: 8/21/2013 9:30:00 AM
You have some beautiful verses here, Richard; too many for me to quote here lol. Sweet read! :)
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Date: 4/28/2013 6:41:00 AM
So original Richard ....I couldn't wait to get to the ending...congratulations
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/28/2013 7:04:00 AM
Thanks agai Donna, I felt the same way. When I start a poem I rarely know what the outcome will be.
Date: 4/25/2013 6:07:00 AM
I like where you took this contest, Richard. Cool. Congrats on the win!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/25/2013 6:50:00 AM
Thanks Caleb
Date: 4/24/2013 10:04:00 PM
Hey Rick, congratulations on your win! Very imaginative write, I enjoyed it much! Hope all is well my friend. : )
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/24/2013 11:10:00 PM
All is well, thanks for the visit.
Date: 4/24/2013 7:42:00 PM
Richard, congratulations with the "From here to the moon and back " contest.... xox~ LINDA
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/24/2013 7:51:00 PM
Thanks Linda
Date: 4/24/2013 6:50:00 PM
Congrats On Your Win~A.O
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/24/2013 7:12:00 PM
Thanks A.O I didn't even know I won. What a nice surprise.
Date: 4/22/2013 10:02:00 AM
One of your most imaginative yet! I love how "out of the box" you went with this contest entry. When you can look at the mighty planets and think of them as marbles, for some greater entities kid's game, you know that the author has a very active mind! I'm not sure what this tale leads me to believe, however it is a wonderful bit of fantasy.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/22/2013 8:05:00 PM
Thanks Timothy, the idea just popped into my head.
Date: 4/21/2013 9:35:00 PM
A different take on this title. Very interesting read.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/22/2013 6:41:00 AM
Thanks Eileen
Date: 4/21/2013 7:02:00 PM
This is an amazing and fantastic write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this fabulous poem this evening! What a terrific piece, such a grand poem, Great Work!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/22/2013 8:06:00 PM
Thanks Russell, so nice to see you.

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