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Written 7 September for The Simple Poetry Poetry Contest sponsored by Sotto Poet.

Moon


a silver sickle shape hangs, carved by divine hands
        across the velvet bruise of the greyish sky 
in two weeks, a chipped coin, smoothed by countless tides
         reflecting a silver light that is not its own
but borrowed from a dazzling distant, fiery eye

a splinter shard, a fingernail clipped from heaven
         so thin, it might slip with a soft sigh of the clouds
it drifts on, a pale boat, on an ocean of ink
       carrying wishful whispers of forgotten dreams
and the quiet awful ache of long lonely hours

it paints the sleeping fields in shades of ghastly ghost
        turning traditional trees to skeletal etchings
 shining streams into mere ribbons of mercury
        that coil and uncoil beneath its uncaring stare
shadows stretch, shifting with the deep breath of slumber

it has witnessed extensive empires rise and fall
        lovers whisper warm winsome vows, at times un-kept
solitary souls stroll their painful paths alone
        each step, a silent secret, unseen, unknown
echoed in the moon's indifferent gentle glow

a silent light, hung in the vast shrine of the sky
        illuminating prayers of a dreaming heart
it waxes and wanes, a sure certain reminder
        of the quiet ebb and flow, the spring and autumn
of the slow, sacred, preordained cycle of l
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Andresen Avatar
September 10, 2026 at 10:23 AM
- "a splinter shard, a fingernail clipped from heaven so thin, it might shatter with a soft sigh of the wind" - A wonderful description ... a beautiful poem, Krishnanand - Best wishes in the contest - Without doubt a winning poem :) - hugs
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September 11, 2026 at 5:54 AM
Thank you a lot dear poetess for appreciating the above poem and for your kind wishes. In fact, after reflection I have amended the second verse of the second stanza as follows : "so thin, it might slip with a soft sigh of the clouds", which to my mind conveys a better, clearer image. I wonder what you think... Wishing you the blessings of lihgt.
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