Moon

Meeting the twinkling stars Making skies glow at night Magical in her ways Muse of many poets Marked by her many phases Modes in crescent or full Moving across night sky 2-19-2024

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/20/2024 3:10:00 PM

So far away yet affects the sea and moods.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/20/2024 11:21:00 AM

Brilliant Pleiades, Joseph. Love this form.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/20/2024 9:42:00 AM

The ' Moon ' has become the - " Muse of many poets. " I completely agree, Joseph. Your thoughts are so beautiful and dreamy. I feel as though I'm drifting in the stars. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Hiya Sharma

Date: 2/20/2024 6:47:00 AM

Woww, this is such a gorgeous Pleiades about the glorious aura of moon! I absolutely adore everything about your artistic wordsmithery here, especially "Muse of many poets" That's very true, indeed.. "Meeting the twinkling stars" Ah, how serene and magical.. Love the choice of alliterative words also.. Beautifully crafted, as always. Sending best wishes and light, your way!

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/20/2024 5:47:00 AM

Beautiful poem. I feel like you brought the moon to mh door step. I enjoyed this :)

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/20/2024 12:34:00 AM

This poem caused me to feel the moon dancing in the sky. It was delightful.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/19/2024 4:27:00 PM

loved the repetitive use of 'M'--creative and effective. I enjoyed the read. Hae a pleasant evening, Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/19/2024 1:34:00 PM

Moon delights your canvas, Joseph. A wonderful write dwelling in "M".

Silent One

Date: 2/19/2024 12:10:00 PM

You did this from really well and you have written a few of these.. nice arrangement of words...

Ink Empress

Date: 2/19/2024 12:00:00 PM

Wow i just love everything about this moon pleiades. So magical and captivating and so well articulated with lines that flow so seamlessly! “ muse of many poets” i agree: “ moving across nigt sky” ah i saw the moon through this! Love it