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Writing Challenge - M Words -Sponsored by Constance La France

written 7/23/2023

Moon, you bring romantic poems to life Amid the heavens to me and my wife. We sat as the sun turned the sky amber And absorbed the gray sky; up you clambered. Days anew; you, never having grown old Your witchcraft wink and sounds of gold so bold. We tiptoed to stand and jump for a glimpse Of your brilliant new face, you never skimp. Wistful hues have carried us to realms of dreams On starlite satin sheets and lavender streams.

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Date: 7/30/2023 9:30:00 AM
I often see the moon although i am not particularly looking out for it right then. Whether it is full, waxing or waning it puts me in a good mood. Congratulations on your win my friend Eve. Hugs, blessings Jennifer.
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Date: 7/24/2023 7:47:00 PM
Eve, CONGRATS on your well-deserved win with this descriptive piece. Janice
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Date: 7/24/2023 5:22:00 PM
How very beautiful Eve! Debx
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Date: 7/24/2023 5:16:00 AM
"starlit satin sheets and lavender streams.".... Beautiful usage and a lovely poem. Congratulations Eve on your first place win.
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Date: 7/23/2023 9:18:00 PM
"starlite satin sheets and lavender streams" - Wow! Great image! Congratulations!
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Date: 7/23/2023 4:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Dear Eve. Your poem is as beautiful as "Moon" is! Enjoyed the flow of the couplets. Love ~ Mala
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Date: 7/23/2023 11:48:00 AM
Hello Eve, You are lucky to see the moon. With the fires burning still, i have not seen the moon and stars for a long, long time. Hugs. \Darlene/
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Date: 7/23/2023 6:10:00 AM
Delightful as realms of dreams--much enjoyed your poem, Eve.
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Date: 7/23/2023 5:24:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Eve, I wrote on the same theme...
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Date: 7/23/2023 1:12:00 AM
A lovely poem. Well done.
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