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Writing Challenge - M Words -Sponsored by Constance La France

written 7/23/2023

Moon

Moon, you bring romantic poems to life Amid the heavens to me and my wife. We sat as the sun turned the sky amber And absorbed the gray sky; up you clambered. Days anew; you, never having grown old Your witchcraft wink and sounds of gold so bold. We tiptoed to stand and jump for a glimpse Of your brilliant new face, you never skimp. Wistful hues have carried us to realms of dreams On starlite satin sheets and lavender streams.
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Proxenos Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 9:30 AM
I often see the moon although i am not particularly looking out for it right then. Whether it is full, waxing or waning it puts me in a good mood. Congratulations on your win my friend Eve. Hugs, blessings Jennifer.
Canerdy Avatar
July 24, 2023 at 7:47 PM
Eve, CONGRATS on your well-deserved win with this descriptive piece. Janice
M  Avatar
July 24, 2023 at 5:22 PM
How very beautiful Eve! Debx
George Avatar
July 24, 2023 at 5:16 AM
"starlit satin sheets and lavender streams.".... Beautiful usage and a lovely poem. Congratulations Eve on your first place win.
Alex Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 9:18 PM
"starlite satin sheets and lavender streams" - Wow! Great image! Congratulations!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 4:55 PM
Congratulations on your win, Dear Eve. Your poem is as beautiful as "Moon" is! Enjoyed the flow of the couplets. Love ~ Mala
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 11:48 AM
Hello Eve, You are lucky to see the moon. With the fires burning still, i have not seen the moon and stars for a long, long time. Hugs. \Darlene/
Pandit Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 6:10 AM
Delightful as realms of dreams--much enjoyed your poem, Eve.
Daniel Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 5:24 AM
Beautiful poem, Eve, I wrote on the same theme...
Meadows Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 1:12 AM
A lovely poem. Well done.
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