Moods

MOODS

frothing clouds
unfetter
the blooming orb
of the red sun
haloed by
tangerine dawn

the trees.
still.
listening to God.
the path
of the tropical river
in song
alldeday…alldeday…long

surrounding hills
ever changing
as the day goes
sliding along
slipping
into chameleon clothing

revelation of
sadness and joy
join hues
from morning sun
to eventide
when the coyote moon
illuminates dusk

aroonite…aroonite…long
bellows to shadows
below
waltzing 
magically slow

1/8/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Singh Avatar
March 22, 2017 at 3:24 AM
An enjoyable read! Congrats!
Medders Tobechi Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 8:09 PM
The time of day is evident in the metaphors. It flows well and is a good write. Congrats to you and blessings, Janis.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 8:43 PM
Thank you, Janis!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 8:43 PM
Thank you, Janis!
Green Avatar
January 9, 2017 at 6:26 AM
Wow, this was incredibly beautiful Kim. Really nicely done.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 9, 2017 at 8:01 AM
Thank you, Chris!
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