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Last night, the doors of dark entrapped me Capricious sun, perhaps he's napping Deliberately he comes and goes, with wily ways, I know so well Sometimes he stays an hour more, but then, we know his temper's short, to leave me here, alone to brood and sobered to his moods I batter hard against the night, until my knuckles bleed But, cannot summon him to rush He takes his time, as if a game, then blushes cheeks, again This is the wait, caught in between… the antics of his display Last evening he made his great departure, With amber clouds to frame his face Without a pause, expects applause to come with early sun We blink an eye…and watch him leave with bright red shoes, and a hat of gold He'll wave goodbye, and sink right in the curved rim of the world And when the final curtain draws, there's a sigh behind the hills And all is still.... Companioned by the crescent moon, who, I will welcome in
_______________________________________________ Submitted for "Saving Daylight" contest: sponsored by John Lawless 2/15/15

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/27/2015 10:28:00 PM
Carrie, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win :-) ~SKAT~
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Date: 2/24/2015 5:50:00 PM
Congrats Carrie, I loved this thought provoking write indeed
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Date: 2/23/2015 7:57:00 PM
;) you got robbed :0 a skilled and interesting & colorful verse. Congrad's on your win. Light & love
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Date: 2/22/2015 9:33:00 PM
Beautiful write,Carrie, congratulations on your win. Blessings
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Date: 2/22/2015 7:08:00 PM
stunning image and imagery many congrats Carrie:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/22/2015 6:09:00 PM
Nicely done. Congrats. LINDA
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Date: 2/22/2015 5:31:00 PM
Carrie, the comings and goings of daylight and our inability to make it change its pace. "Deliberately he comes and goes" has a bit of a metaphorical twinge to it. Thanks for being a part of the contest.
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Date: 2/17/2015 12:32:00 PM
So beautiful
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Date: 2/16/2015 2:24:00 PM
This is beautiful Carrie..Your imagery is serene.....hugs Tim
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Date: 2/15/2015 8:25:00 PM
The photograph is def. fantastic dear poet....but the write is stuning ! Awesome Carrie, and so nice to see your post ! Have a wonderrrrrful week......much love, james
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