Charles Henderson Poet Than-Bauk

Mood Indigo

I dig mood indigo,
its mystery so fine
in low light setting

heavenly shades of light
falling fast, night brings
a sight to behold

neon rainbows soon glimmer
brighter with dimmer sun,
and glimmer moves me

Charles Henderson-ap 2012
For Nette's than bauk contest

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Cyndi Macmillan April 13, 2012 at 7:54 PM Charles, I really liked this, just as is! I am fairly certain that a than bauk only has four syllables per line, which I hate to tell you, as I wouldn't want to see this altered. I have an idea, and it involves your caesura blog. I am sending you a soup mail. :) Cyndi

Joann Grisetti April 13, 2012 at 1:31 PM Very well done Than-bauk. This should do well in the contest.

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet April 13, 2012 at 1:30 AM great write.i enjoyed this.