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Mood and mode celebratory

We are alive and so we celebrate vibrancy of the now, that so renews, joyous feeling nodes within us gyrate, bliss becoming the flavour of our muse. Far cry is boredom, with each breath joy grows, such is innate uniqueness of our soul, witness consciousness always in repose, throbs with bliss magnetism sages extol. Just as we delight, watching the ocean or melding with sunsets soft scarlet glow, we savour taste of love’s magic potion, in time dissolved tranquil staid stillness slow. At the epicentre of bliss thunder, our presence is left awestruck in wonder.

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Date: 11/28/2023 3:21:00 PM
I love how you captured the feeling of bliss and love. I especially liked "we savour taste of love's magic potion" Those words were beautiful as were your alliterations and rhyme scheme. Just a delightful read...have a splendid evening, Sara
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Date: 11/28/2023 9:23:00 PM
Thank you, Sara
Date: 11/28/2023 7:22:00 AM
How beautiful is this sonnet seeker. Sometimes we forget to appreciate and celebrate simply being alive and being able to breathe and appreciate all that around us, I absolutely the lines “ or melding with sunsets soft scarlet glow, we savour taste of love’s magic potion,” ah as a sunset lover i cant get enough of it, magical it is every sunset. And i love the alliterations there. Pleasure reading you always
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Date: 11/28/2023 7:54:00 AM
Thank you, dear IE

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