Mood

Vibrant swordfish and 
Tension that swells with time,
A cup full of ice.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Junaid Avatar
May 11, 2024 at 1:18 PM
I really appreciate the short, yet effective format where you use the true essence of words instead of length to portray the mood. The metaphors are great.
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