Montmartre showers

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spring arrives today
a scatter of clouds grey
parisian rains unfurl
winds that twirl and hurl 
umbrellas in the air
petticoats fly up with flair
whether each parisian girl
parades for whim or dare



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

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David Crandall

Date: 3/19/2025 8:12:00 PM

I love the way this flows - what a pleasant picture it creates, and it's a great artwork too.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/20/2025 11:45:00 AM

Thank you very much, David ~